I Love You

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  1. Nasty__Ness

    Nasty__Ness The Queen of Topicals

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    Thanks for the thoughts...
    test
  2. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    "“I love you” don’t mean shit…
    I can call an orange an apple…
    I can say I can fly…
    Tell the world that I am weak…
    Say that in this place is where I belong
    But it doesn’t make it true
    Next time ya wanna speak to me…
    Say it with out the “I love you”"

    damn dog, that was crazy.... nice poem tho... your feelings were said nicely
    test
  3. unspoken1

    unspoken1 Revolutionary Wordsmen

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    nicely done.......feeling it......its like a much better version of my piece
    test
  4. Nasty__Ness

    Nasty__Ness The Queen of Topicals

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    Yes, this is old... but it been a long while... and besides, it's better than starting another thread.. right.

    I would love any and all feedback...
    test
  5. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    Don't up OLDDDDDDD posts.
    test
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