i like big butts and i can not lie! - What i want from a woman

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Tony Blair..., Oct 4, 2003.

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  1. Tony Blair...

    Tony Blair... B.O.T - M.I.A '05

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    I like a woman who is perfect in her imperfections,
    Who doenst listen to the ignorance surrounding my complextion,
    A woman so godly she can pull the coulds from my darker times,
    some one who can see when im down and read between the lines,
    A woman who isnt afraid to fall into the depths of unconditional love,
    A woman who wont run from my troubles but instead stands to rise above,
    To share a passion that every writer dreams of in his songs,
    To share a love that will even through death stay strong,
    A strong woman who isnt afraid to exert herself,
    Who isnt controled by looks,class,greed or wealth,
    A woman who likes me for who i am and with a love that isnt materialistic,
    She can sense when my spirt is down and would never hesitate to lift it,
    With this woman i'd re-write the defftintion of love,
    With no explanation but just the example of us,
    We'd live every day as a happy ending like from the movies,
    we'd have an attraction beyond words or comprehension,
    I'd be so proud that evey opertunity i give your name a mention.
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  2. Blunted Reality

    Blunted Reality Still Blunted on Reality

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    [funny] lol@the title. But yo this was a nice piece man...I really felt this. Keep it up.
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  3. shaztik

    shaztik New Member

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    I liked, sounds like a very perfect women, kinda like me..ha lol anyhow very nice..
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  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    lol i saw the title and I thought i was going to have to close another theard. Nice way to flip the script man.

    one luv
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  5. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    god damn this shit was hot no doubt about it loved the flow loved everything about it damnn damnnnn seriously wee needa collab haha this was hottness damn damn sorry can't stop i think this was amazing the flow especially. nice keep it up.
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  6. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    it was really good and the title was funny as hell

    1ne
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  7. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    [funny] same here


    i really liked this, the first line was great......

    "A woman who isnt afraid to fall into the depths of unconditional love,...."
    ^^^
    i was liking that line a whole lot......because i dont really believe in unconditional love and well i just liked that line.....

    great piece luv, glad you post in the realm more now : )
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  8. MC Radical

    MC Radical twitter.com/TheLastHero69

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    I Luv It! What else can I or anyone else say! This is what true poetry all about...feelings. Once again, great piece. Keep it up!

    One Luv!
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  9. Tony Blair...

    Tony Blair... B.O.T - M.I.A '05

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    [martin lawrance voice] awwww [/martin lawrance voice]

    lol

    cheers for the feedback
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  10. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    lol..thats what i was thinking...nice lil piece u got here.......title defenitally threw me off though..UP
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  11. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    no doubt a very nice drop , yeah the title kinda threw me off a bit but it was a very nice piece yo
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  12. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Damn all my words have been taken by everybody else...
    so I'll just say I loved it...great work

    much love

    peace
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  13. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    yo tony this was ill!!! lol just playing

    thanks for the feedback yall
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  14. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    Damn!! another piece i slept on in the realm...i truly do apologize....this was very beautiful!! Nice concept, the style flowed well...and i defiently enjoyed reading this...cant wait to read your writing in the future....

    mad love
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  15. marc antony

    marc antony It's all about da ass....

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    the title basically summed everything up......
    i mean i understand why the title threw people off.....
    but it kinda falls into place after the poem is read......

    this woman you describe is very......great..no other way to describe her......

    We'd live every day as a happy ending like from the movies

    ^^^simple line, but the hightlight of the poem..... if more of the lines hit like this one....this poem would be awesome......
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  16. Tony Blair...

    Tony Blair... B.O.T - M.I.A '05

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    cheers man...
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  17. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    I like a woman who is perfect in her imperfections,

    that line, i love it...the whole piece was nice, pz.
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  18. Triggaz

    Triggaz New Member

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    what you like girls?
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  19. Triggaz

    Triggaz New Member

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    kidding , pretty good drop man
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