i hate love poems

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  1. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    dont get me wrong good material is good material but in general majority of love poems shouldn't be shared. Occassionally you get one to someones child there nice or to deceased relative i can handle but i feel that poems that are dedicated to lovers if not future lovers should be left for them and only them. It makes it much more personal, much more special to the one you originally wrote it for.

    I'll admit even i've droped a mushy piece for my girlfriend on here, but after thinking about and reading love piece after love piece i felt i was wrong. Because there is so much of them on here it's just not as romantic as it use to be just over played.

    Maybe it's because of the vocab that most use in love poems that i hate, the're really not creative enough to keep my attention.

    Love, dove, above, hug
    kiss, miss, mist
    blady blah blah

    It drives me crazy, now im not just hating cause im in a bad mood or something or im permanently morbid, no i think i've just seen too many of them now to find them exciting. My girlfriend keeps asking when am i going to write another for her, just for her not for here and every time i read one i just think how much i despise to do so. I do love her but i want something that is out of the norm and surprisingly unique. hmmm if i was looking for inspiration on here few have tickled my fancy.

    I think maybe next writters challange should be a love poem dedication, poems that are actually dedicated to someone you love that will read it so you have to put your heart and soul into it. None of this half assed eye pollution because its easier to write.

    Sorry if i offendeed anyone im not speaking to you directly just my opion please dont hate, alot of you love them obviously so keep on dropping dont let me detour you.

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  2. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    me Too....
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  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Thank YOU....somebody finally knows the deal...I hate love poems my damn self man, i can never get into that shit....And if the next writers challenge happens to be a love dedication shit...The Soul wont be doin that one...

    I'm glad my girl dont be asking me to write love poems to her. Lets start a petition

    no love poems in the realm


    :signs name:
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  4. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    x_________ Freya Jones
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  5. Mabus

    Mabus Don't Try

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    listen, I told her
    why don't you stick
    your tongue up my ass

    no, she said.

    well, I said
    if I stick my tongue
    up your ass first
    then will you stick
    your tongue up my
    ass?

    all right, she said.

    I got my head down
    there and looked
    around
    opened a section
    then my tongue
    moved
    forward

    not there, she said
    ahhahahaha
    not there, that's
    not the right place

    you women have
    more holes
    than
    swiss cheese
    I don't want you
    to do it
    why?

    well, then I'll
    have to do it back
    and then at the next
    party
    you'll tell people
    I licked your ass
    with my tongue

    suppose I promise
    not to tell?

    you'll get drunk,
    you'll
    tell

    o.k., I said
    roll over and
    I'll stick it in
    the other
    place

    she rolled over and
    I stuck my tongue
    in that
    other place

    we were in love

    we were in love
    with except
    what I said at
    parties
    and we were not
    in love
    with each others
    ass holes

    she wants me to
    write a love
    poem
    but I think if people
    can't love each others
    ass holes
    and farts
    and shits
    and terrible parts
    just like they love
    the good
    parts
    that ain't
    complete love so,
    as far as love goes
    as far as we
    have gone
    this poem
    will have
    to do.
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  6. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    hahahaha ^^ umm yeah


    so then write her an anti love poem - i think im going to write one
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  7. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    mabus damn that happen to you too, its like an infection haha nice piece

    @llb@tty *signs name* anti love poems, kill em kill em all
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  8. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    @llb@tty *also signs name* for more ass licking stories
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  9. *Princess*

    *Princess* skantless bitch

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    i can never write love poems...i can write really good i hate you poems though...i dont know if its still considered a love poem if their about someone i love...?
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  10. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    hmm i done a few in my time...
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  11. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    lol@mabus, nice message
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  12. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    people have responded well to most of the pieces i have written, And most of them are "love poems". I happen to like love poems, But sometimes they can be overly corny at times, It's all in the way yuo read them i guess.
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  13. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    i sale love poems for 20 a poem get paid good
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  14. InFiNiT_EEE

    InFiNiT_EEE dreaming out loud

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    yea love poems are really played out....most of my love poems are not happy ones tho...and its bout gettin heart broken and whatnot. haha..dont post em tho..

    i dun even like readin poems bout love...like omg i luv u, ur eyes r so beautiful.. iwana be wit u forever, blah blah Zzzzzzz...
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  15. InFiNiT_EEE

    InFiNiT_EEE dreaming out loud

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    hahaahhahaha!
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  16. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    ..exactly, the wording can either make or break a love poem
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  17. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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    I really like love poems alot.. as long as it comes straight from the heart and it's original.. Alot of love poems is real repetitive which makes them sometimes hard to like. But, I love writing love poetry.. as long as I feel it's coming from my heart... and it's original and not cliche.. It's a good way to get out my feelings and express myself from my heart on the paper. For me it's alot easier to write a love poem and getting it out.. than actually talking to the person...
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  18. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    When I actually write a love poem its usually pretty dark, maybe because my experiences with "love" have been grim, but I do agree that it is a good way to express yourself...either way to call love poems "cliche" is almost an understatement these days, besides the occasional exception
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  19. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    this dude is ill


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=666921


    and



    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=656958
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  20. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    well i dunno i love love poems but that is sometimes i don't usually write love poems for a girland if i do she has to be special i did it only once she was special i miss her:( damn but i think i dropped it only once poetry is poetry but you right that is special it should be between you and her. but sometimes you want to share the love of yours between other people to let everyone know how much she means to you soo it's cool sometimes as long as you don't do it all the time.
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