[I Guess I Should] Apolagize - Feat. Chuckie

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  1. Psicobabble

    Psicobabble Rebellious Rhetoric

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  2. KEVINKim

    KEVINKim New Member

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    beat was aight...

    feelin this delivery...need a bit more presence....lyrically expressive....put a bit more emotion...vocal fluctuation..etc.

    chuckie was good as usual....real short but sweet......concotion of the cops watch
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  3. Da Cypha!

    Da Cypha! Beats!

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    uuuuuuuuuuupin
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  4. skittlz

    skittlz MotherFucker

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    wow^ i dont think that critique is on point at alll.....

    emotion is real....

    hook is nice

    chuckie's lyrics are dope

    ill beat, fits really well with the topic and vibes yall gave off


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    sorry, im feelin this a lot and dont have much else to say

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  5. Dimensionz

    Dimensionz UnKnown Legend

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    feelin the choice of beat...
    quality is ight, its listenable....

    1st verse- ya style a lil different, lyrics and •••••••••• is there, not really feelin ya voice.....delivery is clean....ryme scheme is nice wit it, and i like ya emphasis on ya lyrics, you put a good amount of energy into it.....

    Hook is coo, you did ya thang....

    2nd verse- dude killed it all the way thru, delivery is very fluent and agressive, lyrics stand out....ryme scheme is crush..."A concocktion of the cops watch"...tight....lyrics is real conceptual and i like how you speaken on some real shit......i dunoo ima be honest, im feelin this verse from chucky more then the first verse and thirdverse...

    overall both yall did ya thing, im jus feelin chucky's style a lil more....but good shit keep the shit cracken.....

    return the favor as well:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=941646
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  6. Da Cypha!

    Da Cypha! Beats!

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    i loved the beat damn whos beat is this again... damn forgot it

    anyways.. first verse is nice eventho i like you to rap faster and not this stretched.. chucke came really nice.. hooks nice.. overall song is nice.. eventho u got alotta better shit psi

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  7. BenLatin

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    Lets see what it is fellow american...lol...
    make sure you return the favor foo!
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=942444

    oh yea baby smooth coo beat...i like it...this shit tuff boy...
    love it when it rains huh nigg@?...
    i need this beat foo....
    i need it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    point me in the dirrection of the beat foo...
    lol...
    ok ok ok now on to your flows and the rating of the mc that you are...
    "ima let the song cry"
    your in put with the emotion your supposed to have....i like what cha sayin but it almost sounds like your complainning about things over the beat ....get a lil more focused on the tone you use ma nig...
    chuckie sound coo too but P is more in tone and mood for this beat...
    i like how ya'll did this up...chuck from the lix huh?
    i remember you •••••...
    i still got a copy of the "AudioHolics-Loud and Clear " Album in its PLASTIC un opened..
    that mean i kept it real thru out the years nigg@.....
    this track could have been better it almost sound like you dudes WERENT INTO IT..but you guys pulled it off somehow....

    this shit coo tho..

    be safe nig's...

    return favor..dont stunt on me
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=942444
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=942444
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  8. Psicobabble

    Psicobabble Rebellious Rhetoric

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    Thanks for takin the time to check & reply y'all.

    Alright, this song, along with all my recent tracks, are products of my current experimental stage. I'm testing the water to see what I do and don't want to use in the future. I wanna know what is worth working on and what isn't. So the slow flow, and the emotionless verse here are a part of that. The point was to sound numb.

    thanks for the honesty people, I'll work on everything that's lackin.
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  9. Da Cypha!

    Da Cypha! Beats!

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  10. RePerCuZionZ

    RePerCuZionZ Square-Wave Creator

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    ILL shit, why the fuck is this getting slept on ????
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  11. skittlz

    skittlz MotherFucker

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    ^ yea where are any of the real heads at now
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  12. PMC

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    song is pretty straight... not your typical shit... the only thing you always had a problem with were hooks if you dont spit them aggressively... you're better at bein psicobabble, man
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  13. Jaylacage

    Jaylacage Criticus Maximus

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    yo babble its good to experiment man....make the music that YOU wanna make and dont let nobody else tell you other wise...for the longest time i wasnt doin shit for myself an now i found the shit i like to do.....i was workin wit da cypha for a good while doin shit that wasn't me...but i feel this joint mos def...rap shouldn't be simplictic man..you have the english language to express yahself so take advantage of it....i was feelin this though..although im use to hearin yah shit quicker where yah flow is sick, this is a nice change...dont let people expect somethin from you, keep em guessin an experiment a while man..this shit was nice though jus for the fact also that i havent really heard shit like this from you as much in the past..u may have done some shit like this but i havent heard..but chuckie blessed it as well....shiiiiiiit..straight blazin....nice shit though man ....i dont post much on here so i would appreciate if yo get some time in to peep the track i did for my man lx's mixtape as well...im doin an ep with the man and if all goes well i can take a trip to europe next year an perform on tour..but blah....heres the link...my old shit if u have heard me..throw it out the window..i do hip hop/alternative/experimental/ intertwined with some singin jus to let you know...da cypha knows what im talkin bout..lol...but anyways..hit it up if you get time an nice joint btw..keep em comin..pz....

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=943120

    JayLa

    there i edited my misconception
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  14. Da Cypha!

    Da Cypha! Beats!

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    man i didnt make that beat lol

    and i hit that thread up already mofo
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  15. Jaylacage

    Jaylacage Criticus Maximus

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    i havent been asleep yet..gimme a break...lol...shiiiit
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  16. Ness Lee

    Ness Lee I'm kind of a big deal

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    u're a fag homes. u dont talk to me anymore. do u want to be a peice of shit forever?
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  17. chucke

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    this is grown folk shit, and psi killed it.
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  18. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    this shit is nasty.....babble came real nice....feelin the realness in the lyrics....diggin the laid back flow, shits pretty original....delivery is solid....hook is dope, feelin it.....chuckie came pretty good...he comes ill with lyrics....flow is nice....babble's second verse is real as hell, feelin this mos def....damn, this is a sick song....both emcees came real nice....good job....keep spittin that realness, peace
    -EGON

    ayo, whenever u get a chance, peep my shit, im gettin slept on like a muthafucker:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=942976
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  19. Thunda1cent

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  20. Psicobabble

    Psicobabble Rebellious Rhetoric

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    Whoa, let's up this once.
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