I got my swagger back

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  1. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Man I think I got my swagger back

    Come on

    Yall don't even have to act like that

    Don't be mad because I got the sway in my hips back

    Or at the fact that

    When I lick my lips the fella's don't know how to act

    Man yall can't even be mad at me

    because my game is lite weight pimping

    You see

    I lost my swagger sometime ago

    and every chance yall had yall let me know

    Now yall acting mad at me because I glow

    Words spoken from the tongue let yall know

    Once I was torn down, but I have been rebuilt

    Once a slave, but now a Queen has been revealed

    Real in every since of the word

    Elegant

    Glamorous

    Adored by many

    Loved by more

    You see my swagger is that of a confident sway

    That of a Queen that reigns

    That of a Warrior that will fight til the death

    That of a Scholar that can past any test

    My swagger is so magnificent it even makes me blush

    In a library while sitting in silence the Librarian still tells me to hush

    Man I think I got my swagger back

    Yall fools just don't know

    yall better watch out cause here I go...
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  2. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    always like your work as well Candy keep it coming.
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  3. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Thank you RIP... hell what do you got to do to get some love in here...lol
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  4. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    i don't know ma lol but i'll give you all i got haha
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  5. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    lol.... thanks... i'll take it....
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  6. ebonisunset

    ebonisunset Nemesis of Truth

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    well, well, well i see like wine with time you only get better. long time no type sis but i am back after a long writers block. that was awesome as ususal. keep out doing ya self queen
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  7. Poetical Techniquez

    Poetical Techniquez Lost in Thought

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    Whut up sis...did u actually write a poem wow...i will assume that you are just starting to write again. This didn't seem to have your usual rhythm to it...the lines seem quicker and the wordplay wasn't all the way there...but the foundation of you is there which is key...topic is definately you just with a slightly different feel to it tho...anyway tho nice job....KEEP WRITE'IN THO....don't make me hurt you lol
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  8. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    In a library while sitting in silence the Librarian still tells me to hush

    oohh I love it haha
    This was a nice read for me as well.
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  9. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Well long time no see.... you know I am smiling from ear to ear seeing old heads up in here giving me love and constructive criticism.... and it is all welcome... Eboni thank you so much for the love PT i will be back on the top of my game in a blink of an eye... and i'm not going to stop writng.... RealMs thank you so much for the love.....Eboni i can't wait to read some of your new stuff....
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  10. Evg.poet

    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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    I'm really feeling that....you gotta know what you have before anyone else can try to put a label on it....
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  11. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Having seen anything from you in awhile. If it takes an old head to get all the other old heads to come out from nowhere like that then we need you to post something everyday lol.

    I enjoyed the read most definitely. Always good to read something with a little joy.

    "In a library while sitting in silence the Librarian still tells me to hush"

    ^made me chuckle a little.

    One luv
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  12. hushugv

    hushugv New Member

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    well god damn, if this isn't an old school Realm Reunion!!! I'm glad to see you got your swagger back angel, though I don't think you ever lost it. I gotta agree with PT though, this is just the tip of the iceberg for you. Posters in here have no idea what they are in for once you shake the rust off a little!

    is it just me or are there four of the Poetical Prophets in this thread?

    Now THATS a throw back!
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  13. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Wow Judge what is upyou know i am smiling from ear to ear.... thank you for the love... and yes I am slowly but surly coming up off the shelf and shaking the dusk up off of me... and yes i do believe it is four of us from pp...

    Mindsoul thank you so much for the feed back it is much appreciated

    Evg poet thanks for the love....
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  14. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    Real in every since of the word

    Elegant

    Glamorous

    Adored by many

    Loved by more

    You see my swagger is that of a confident sway

    That of a Queen that reigns

    That of a Warrior that will fight til the death

    That of a Scholar that can past any test

    ^ Like that the best right there, but the whole body of work was good...this was a good read and it would seem sort of hard to do a piece about swagger but you did this well....this reminds me of some spoken word, great job...check my work once i get some on here, one love
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    Look at this...All I can say is Dam...I haven't been in here for a long time and what do I see...BlackAngel putting it down like she always do...Feeling your poem but I am always feeling your writting...Glad to see you back and writting...
    Great work and Keep writting...
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  17. .SyKe.

    .SyKe. In The Trenches

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  18. Common_Sense79

    Common_Sense79 Truth Peddler

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    great job. flows nice.
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  19. SIZZLA

    SIZZLA New Member

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    cute... still doin you... btw, i have a son in Renaldsburg... sp
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  20. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    thank you... oh really.... so do you be in columbus? let me know maybe we can go check out poetry night @The brown stone on main

    Everybody else thank you so much for the love all the comments are most appreciated....
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