I Got a Story to Tell (Ace'd)

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  1. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Haha...a remix to the Biggie track I did. Gonna post up the instrumental to it too. My verse starts around 0:22 so time it with that. You know I'll get back at your post. Get at me!

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    This..is how I envision my first show goin...in only a way I could imagine it...shout out to Biggie..haha..

    Woke up in the morning from a full night’s rest
    With my girl on my chest, thank God I’m blessed
    It’s just, another day in the life that I’ve been livin
    Tryna move it forward with this mic that I’ve been given
    The life that I envision..is on the other line
    But I got it on the phone so it’s gotta be a sign
    And if I get the chance another part of me’d be born
    Then it told me, “We’re lookin’ for an artist to perform
    And word around the block is your rhymes are pretty hot
    And this city needs a name, why don’t ya give it a shot?”
    I stopped...damn nearly dropped the phone
    And thought this is my chance to get atop the throne
    And I’m a mile high so that ain’t much of a climb
    And knowin’ how I rhyme it’d take nothin’ but time
    I said, “Of course sir, see I’m just lookin to get somethin’ heard
    I’m just tryna generate more revenue than Zuckerberg,”
    He laughed, said “Son, you got it straight
    Just meet me out back of the club by 8
    Don’t be late,” Heh…I wouldn’t miss this shit for anything
    First lap of luxury to candy-painted everything
    And diamond-studded wrist cuffs, bottles in the limousine
    All that I’m envisioning and everything that’s in between!
    Heh…now to make it all reality
    Time to make a living where the wages ain’t hourly
    Made a call and told everybody in my family
    Told my baby soon we’d be restin’ in the canopies
    With beaches in our views when we’re gettin’ off our cruise
    I afford just for bein’ hot shit that’s in the news
    And know that every weekend we’ll be dippin’ in the pools
    Of a different hotel cuz we live by different rules
    Since I told the world get it right and never get confused
    Cuz the Prophet’s ‘bout to blow and your boy just lit the fuse!
    Told the homies come along and catch me on the stage
    I’ll be aiming for the stars and I’ll never disengage!
    Told the haters meet me there, fill up all your rage
    And bring the nearest coroner, I’ll kill it all today!
    Couple hours passed as I thought of all the tracks
    I could spit just to get this city all up on my back
    Next thing I knew it was time for me to leave
    Feelin’ so nervous I could barely even breathe
    Then my baby said, “Fuck ‘em all, leave ‘em in exhaust,”
    As we sped on to the club ‘til this fucker cut us off
    In a piece of shit car that damn nearly hit the rail
    Slammed on his brakes, hopped out the car and bailed
    With his ass butt-naked, wondered why the fuck he’s running
    Til my baby shouted out “That motherfucker owes me money!”
    She chased him down and caught him as his faggot ass tripped
    Beat his ass, “Where’s the cash?” He said, “It’s back with that bitch,”
    A slut that tried to get at me, turned into a prostitute
    Tossed her baby out the car and sped away, “She’s on the loose!”
    We followed her, burnin rubber til she crashed
    Right into club and took the money from her filthy ass
    Then took the mic and said, “It’s important as hell
    That everybody listens up, I got a story to tell.”​

    Links:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1259160-coke-induced-freestylin.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1259705-no-time-week-weak.html
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  3. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Ah, nice s***, the storyline was ill in this joint. I literally read this out loud to the beat and barely tripped over a word on the first take so I know you should def record this asap.

    He laughed, said “Son, you got it straight
    Just meet me out back of the club by 8
    Don’t be late,” Heh…I wouldn’t miss this shit for anything
    First lap of luxury to candy-painted everything
    And diamond-studded wrist cuffs, bottles in the limousine
    All that I’m envisioning and everything that’s in between!
    Heh…now to make it all reality
    Time to make a living where the wages ain’t hourly
    Made a call and told everybody in my family
    Told my baby soon we’d be restin’ in the canopies
    ^^^That was tight. The wording is nice dog, it feels like you're talking over the beat and not forcing anything.

    Then my baby said, “Fuck ‘em all, leave ‘em in exhaust,”
    As we sped on to the club ‘til this fucker cut us off
    In a piece of shit car that damn nearly hit the rail
    Slammed on his brakes, hopped out the car and bailed
    With his ass butt-naked, wondered why the fuck he’s running
    Til my baby shouted out “That motherfucker owes me money!”
    She chased him down and caught him as his faggot ass tripped
    Beat his ass, “Where’s the cash?” He said, “It’s back with that bitch,”
    A slut that tried to get at me, turned into a prostitute
    Tossed her baby out the car and sped away, “She’s on the loose!”
    We followed her, burnin rubber til she crashed
    Right into club and took the money from her filthy ass
    Then took the mic and said, “It’s important as hell
    That everybody listens up, I got a story to tell.”
    ^^^That was like a movie scene, I was really diggin this part and the closer topped the song off perfectly....no need for a hook.

    I hoe you're the cat that was in my crew from EB...if so good to see ya again, if not, good to meet you.
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  4. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Haha...EB? I'm tryin to remember what that stands for but I can't think of it right now, lol. But probably me. Good lookin on everything here.

    Uppin
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  5. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Yea Emcee-Battle with The General (me), Dethstryque, K Killah, iitalix, Wolve, G Force, etc.
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  6. Radical Sun

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    I love that sh!t, could of wrapped the whole thing in quotes.
    Good sh!t as usual Ace.
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  7. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Aaaah, I remember a couple of you. Remember that Dreams collab we did way back? lol..

    And good looks RS
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  8. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    Yea this was tite man, actually, even tho it was long, like it was supposed to be, I thought it ended a lil prematurely but still a gud read.
    Couple hours passed as I thought of all the tracks
    I could spit just to get this city all up on my back
    Next thing I knew it was time for me to leave
    Feelin’ so nervous I could barely even breathe
    Then my baby said, “Fuck ‘em all, leave ‘em in exhaust,”
    As we sped on to the club ‘til this fucker cut us off
    In a piece of shit car that damn nearly hit the rail
    Slammed on his brakes, hopped out the car and bailed
    With his ass butt-naked, wondered why the fuck he’s running
    Til my baby shouted out “That motherfucker owes me money!"

    This had to be my fav. part cuz it shows that no matter how confident and cocky one is, when its time, them butterflies still get ta rolling! Then bam! Back ta reality, somebody cuts ya off and it's a dude dat owes ya chick some bread, kinda thought it was cheesy but I had ta laugh like "damn, he got a gangsta bitch too huh!"

    Gud shit man, and if ya could check out "Back It Up N Dump It" the links in my sig. I think u checked out one of them so if u already hit "Back It Up N Dump It" then hit up "Cash on Decc"

    Gud Lookn
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  9. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    Oh yea when its the day of the show it seems like the day flies by for me too!
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  10. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Haha, I checked out tragedy before but I got back to both your other links you got in there. And yeah, there actually is a dude who owes my girl a bunch of money so i figured it'd be funny to throw him in there, lol. And RS, I'm about to get to your other piece here in a sec.

    Uppin again
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  11. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    Yoo, I'ma get at dat but I'm bout ta leave so I'll hit ya up tomorrow or so, but I gotcha on dat.
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  12. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    lol, do what you gotta do man
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