I f--- my b---- good.

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by DopeHead, Jan 26, 2012.

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  1. DopeHead

    DopeHead New Member

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    This is a quickie .... lol ... She only get a hot pocket but it's the best hot pocket she ever had.

    I tryin to bent her backwards till her back hurts
    Got her on her knees like she prayin to her pastor
    ... her lord & savior, she thinkin the lord'll save her
    he will, but me, I'm tryin to savor the flavor...
    her candy is Good & Plenty, got me & wantin some Now & Later
    can't deny that she serve me & cater like a waiter
    or gourmet chef, a little fillet & foreplay's best
    before I screw & nail her to the wall ... call that doorway sex
    I beat it up till it known around your city like a turnpike
    then she skip, hop & jump on that morning wood like termite
    we blazin a joint, join the mile high club & the class is first flight
    guarentee her best night is my worst night,
    it's like its her first night or like she given birth like ....

    AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

    I could build a log cabin how I'm layin this wood
    but all yall need to know is I fuck my bitch good.
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  2. DopeHopes

    DopeHopes KS [NC9]

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    I think it has potential and the metaphors are great, I just think you got excited with them and put em places where they don't fit in as well. Other than that **** that bitch gooood
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  3. JoNathanDaTruth

    JoNathanDaTruth North Coast Music Group

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    fuck that bitch... i like it...
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