I Don't Write Poetry

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  1. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    I don't write poetry
    Because I can't express myself,
    Thru written or spoken word...
    I don't even like to be HEARD,
    Or paid attention to...
    The misconception with me
    Is that I'm a "poet"
    Sharing words of wisdom,
    And I don't even pay my
    Cable bill on time...
    i don't even rhyme in every line,
    so why even bother
    Trying to decipher my message
    Because there is none.
    I don't write poetry,
    I just spit lies
    So I can get laid...
    Fuck my brains out,
    And maybe get paid...
    I talk in proverbs
    To make panties wet,
    I don't really love this...
    I'll say anything to
    Seduce a dumb bitch
    In public
    Knowing only a first name--
    I'm a "poet" by fame,
    And I claim to know
    More than I really do,
    And it only works with people
    Who can't see me thru.--
    My true colors
    Are peeking thru,
    But you're so gullible,
    I have no problem decieving you...
    Because you're a Pseudo-Intellectual
    Just like ME....
    Only difference is...
    I'm honest about it.
    Maybe. *grins*
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  2. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    this is my fav piece from you.....
    "The misconception with me
    Is that I'm a "poet"
    Sharing words of wisdom,
    And I don't even pay my
    Cable bill on time...
    i don't even rhyme in every line,
    so why even bother
    Trying to decipher my message
    Because there is none."
    ^^^
    my fav. part

    enjoyed the whole piece......there were no "filler lines" in here it if you know what i mean......the whole piece was good....
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  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    I was feeling this one and ofcourse how you decieved the reader in thinking you don't write Poetry in the beginning, making them wonder why you're doing it now. I found this to be quite creative and at the same time, interesting to read how you defined that you were a "Poet". You were saying how you could pose as a Poet, although it won't work for people who know you well enough, because they'll see what we don't. Then, how you don't even pay your cable bill, and well.. Nobody's perfect in this world, so everyone makes mistakes at times. Great piece, overall. My blessings..
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  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    And I claim to know
    More than I really do,

    dont we all at times!

    this was a dope piece A.....creative...u been comin with some ill joints lately....like the repitition of in this...been meaning to sit down and write a piece something like this.....

    Keep it up...always enjoy your work
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  5. ~S*T*A*R*M~

    ~S*T*A*R*M~ Goddess

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    [color=ffcc99]Damn.. Y'all are doing it up big in this forum! This reminds me of why I used to spend more time here than any other place when I first came to RM.

    I love how versatile your style is. You seem so free with it. You're not bound by any poem past, so you can take the next peice anywhere, and I love & appreciate that.

    This poem was ... real. Honest. Gritty. Biting. Engaging. Fresh. Sharp. So many words to describe it, but bottom line: It was on point. I really liked the way you wrote this! Very nicely done!
    [/color]
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  6. FukkedUPKidR

    FukkedUPKidR Guest

    The entire piece was awesome...Nothing seemed forced, real smooth..Concept was dope.. the honest truth, and then the ending ..hehe it made me smile. My favorite part would have to be what Feme Sole quoted..Definitely a poem I could read over & over again =)

    Keep it up.
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  7. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    this was great because u used free verse instead of a rhyme scheme... and u admitted it in the piece. lol. pretty much explained what a poet is... good job.
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  8. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    im always in your threads....i love your work...u have so much talent...i liked this one alot and the title drew me in....nice very nice.


    ~resp~
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  9. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    some dope shit, very creative and flowed well. I'ma say this is one of my favorites from you. Keep that shit up

    one luv
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  10. the Guy with a Pen

    the Guy with a Pen a Svan Production

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    goooood stuff..
    very nice poetry being written here,


    this is like a confession in poetry form..
    good honestly..
    good expression


    all that good stuff.. lol
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  11. sagacious infant

    sagacious infant reflecting the sun

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    scary how this reminds me of someone i know...

    monsters...the lot of you...us...nah, just you


    this is decent...this is lookin' in the mirror right after you did some grimey shit...

    lol it's deep *snaps fingers*
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  12. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    liked the whole thing
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  13. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    l^^
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  14. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    this is how i feel about this...save myself some typing lol...it was very nice..good job!
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  15. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Damn...err...uhh...umm.... I don't know what to say... [dunno] Thanks a lot. Put a smile on my face today.
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  16. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    should have posted this like 50 times and just flooded up the whole board
    with some good poetry
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  17. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Nah...don't wanna do that...But thanks for supportin a brotha.
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  18. Kareem

    Kareem Still Ballin

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    u got no skill ya homo bum
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  19. utsukushikumegami

    utsukushikumegami That's Ms. Goddess to you

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    ok, hold it. I ain't got nothing against you personally Kareem, but don't be coming here to the poetry realm dissin' people's poetry just because you *think* you can. Either use constructive criticism or get out. Simple as that.

    Let me see YOUR poetry tough guy, I don't see you writing any masterpieces...
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  20. utsukushikumegami

    utsukushikumegami That's Ms. Goddess to you

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    by the way...this was a nicely done piece...I like the idea of it a lot. Your writing is exceptional...keep it up!
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