"I Don't Wanna Be Right" snippet(drop links)

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  1. BestMove

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    Returnin the Favor:

    listenin...
    beat is coo, cant hear it much tho.. vocals seem to loud over the beat.. this is like the beat my boy HT made
    voice is dope,
    flow is nice
    delivery fits
    quality is coo..
    only problem i see about this is the vocals, too loud maybe, or it might be my speakers
    overall a good joint man! im feelin it
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    thx btw if ANYONE wants to collab - hit me up on aim: Cuc0Monstr0
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    Beats pretty dope. You got a good voice, the mediums sounds too high though, might just be your mic though. (But turning the mediums down would probably help some)

    Flows a little choppy. Sounds like you wrote it accapella and looked for a beat it would sound good to. You might want to add some syllables here and there so it sounds smoother.

    Add some dubs to strengthen the rhymes too, so they'll stand out more. Turn up the beat some (or turn down the vocals)

    The delivery is alright for the cadance (delivery fits well with the beat), but some more energy would help. You'll get more confident the more you rap, that's probably what the problem is.


    Favor returned

    (And on my thread you said something about an obvious punch-in. [not argueing or anything, just explaining] That was in between the bridge and verse 2)

    Hope my feedback has helped you some, amani
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    thx i appreciate all da feedback
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    yea man - about the energy - like when i hear it now - i wanna do it over cause i hear the lack of energy.

    I hope that potential im showing means a beat from u in the future lol nah jp

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    lmao good thing you warned that ya quality was bad because I got on headphones and that shit would of fucked my ears up. I remember my home recording days so it's all good. You got the emotion down, I think your flow was a little choppy here and there, but it ain't bad. I don't know if you read your lyrics off paper or anything, but it's best if you memorize your lines, that way it could flow alot better. Word of advice, you should add some multis, cause to me it just makes the verse more interesting, and it shows versatility. Beat was ok, I like the sample so it's cool. You got potential, basically the only thing I can see that needs work is getting the flow to sound as smooth as possible nah mean? That's basically it, everything else is straight, voice is cool, content is cool, lyrics cool, just flow, and of course quality...keep elevating man...one
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    yea i usually have multis n shit but i wanted to switch it up a bit

    uppppppppppppppp
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    i like this beat.. definatly need to work on emotion.. never rhyme possible and hopspital again, that was kinda lame.. pronounciation is really bad at some points.. def dont sound 15, sound much older.. got a lot of potential

    thx for hitten my link man, stay up^
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    cmon guys dont be mean :(
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    ight, let's see what u got young...


    woooooow @ how hurt your quality is.... damn =/. the way the quality is, it sounds like your slurring your words. flow is there, delivery needs work tho...shit sounds a lil too flat pimp. def don't have a young'n's voice....iono, the way the quality is, there isn't much else i canm tell you...cuz this sounds pretty off because of it. when you re-record, post that version up, and i'll give u a better assessment...


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=912687

    ^^return that...1



    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=912687
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