I did a song with Warbux.

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  1. Q oNe A

    Q oNe A R.I.P. Point Game.

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  2. NTfrody

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    I have faith in the lyrics but the track is distractingly bad. I'd love to hear you guys with better beats!
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  3. Q oNe A

    Q oNe A R.I.P. Point Game.

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    Lol I thought the beat was pretty dope but you're not the first person to hate on it so that was my bad for picking it. Next time it'll be a nasty beat.
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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin as I type , beats ok , cool underground cypher feel to it , first verse seemed forced a bit or just not as on point as the second , not bad tho , second verse , Bux did his thing as usual , third verse , some nice lines , did his thing on this , fourth verse , comes in on point , did his thing as well . I was feelin the 2nd n 3rd verses a lil more on this , overall dope joint
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  5. Resilient.

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    First verse - SLOW DOWN. A lot of your words are slurred, and when you have a line with less syllables, you drag out a syllable which sounds terrible.

    Warbux - dope. As usual. Some good metaphors in your verse as well.

    IS - Good pace. Lyrics are okay, nothing too spectacular.

    Fourth - I like this delivery. Voice is good over this beat, too.

    Overall, decent collab.
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  6. Q oNe A

    Q oNe A R.I.P. Point Game.

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    I appreciate the constructive criticism. Thank you all!
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