I Could see Twista On This Beat (187 type $hit)

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  1. OUNCE

    OUNCE Soundclick.com/FreeBeats

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  2. krayven

    krayven Midwests Finest

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    this has a war vibe to it for sure. ..
    the drums need some compression and EQ to make them more aggressive sounding. .. more specifically that snare. .. you could also try layering a bassy kick under ur snare give it more UMPH. .. cuz this has potential that's for sure. .. the snare just needs more attack.

    not bad at all as a whole tho. .. I like the ad-libs and effects u got goin on in here.


    holla at me. ..

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  4. WillieK

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=808428
    ^^show bak some luv plz

    i think the hatz and snare are panned way to out on to the left and right side and shit
    the melody is aite, got a bit techno feel to it rather than Twista
    the drum break is not tat good though
    not only the pattern ait hard enough, but the kick and snare as well
    i think this beat need some rework and shit

    lykin the concept on dis though
    iwt a bit more changez here and there this could be a reall bangin track

    keep it comin manh
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  5. MagickB3ats

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    Feelin' the intro, and the Chorus is really affecting that piano, snare is panned way too left. Iight, :hears the hi hat:, always leave all the drums in the middle, and I'm not feelin' yo kick, sounds like a dance beat instead of a hip hop beat. The melody needs a better instrument, the Chorus effect really destroys an instrument sometimes. Pan the instruments, not the drums. It ain't Twista material. And the drum break down needs some work. Revise this beat, I suggest you work on the mixing and the instruments. It has potential, so for now, 6/10.

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  6. OUNCE

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    Preciate all the feedback- I think ill leave the beat how it is though.
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  7. OUNCE

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    Anymore responses to this beat from any1 who feels it?
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  9. OUNCE

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    Preciate that wms- I hit up your site and mann your beats go hard too, stay up- 1, Bund
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  10. OUNCE

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    If anybody wants to use this beat, just leave a reply with a link or sumthin. 1
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