I can Listen...

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by lyricalpriest, Dec 9, 2011.

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ~Walk with me ~
    ~you can talk to me all you want baby i can~
    ~take time to listen~
    ~baby i can coz i care!!!~
    ~Lady come with me~
    ~Im so in L-O-V-E~
    ~with you when your touching me~
    ~i want you to be my lady~
    ~close both your eyes~
    ~open your mind~
    ~whats it like if u were mine~
    ~baby just imagine..~
    test
  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    some heart felt longing in this written. I connect to it man. To bad she is all the right reasons...thanks for sharing.
    test
  3. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    nice. i know the feeling.
    test
  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    something short and to the point ya feel... bout to drop another soon thanks coup and shout out's patrown...
    test
  5. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    hell ya keep em comin man. i wana get on it but im fuckin tired and just catching up on what i wasnt here for.
    test
  6. AboutTyme

    AboutTyme New Member

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    Nice little short piece straight anf to the point...nice read
    test
  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Thank You Kindly sir! once you get you post count up you'll be able to make your own threads with your own work...

    make sure to check the RSTL theirs some good writtens in there to man
    test
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