how bad it hurts

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  1. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    i just wrote this out now, it's not complete, needs to be polished but this just came out, line for line, i changed nothing, pure feelings.

    august twenty four two thousand and ten
    the day the Lord took from me a best friend
    now i can't describe the way i feel inside
    it hurts so bad like a part of me has died
    the pain is numbing like a line of cocaine
    looking for a ray of sunshine through the rain
    i just sit and stare not thinking just feeling
    what kind of justice is the world now dealing
    i try to scream i try to cry
    but my voice is tied Lord why'd she die?
    was it something i did or something i didn't do
    tell me it wasn't me Lord give me proof
    i feel so full of guilt that i'm the one to blame
    any chance of redemption is hidden under shame
    i can see her lying there still not breathin
    leavin me looking for a muthafucken reason
    leavin me lost in a world without seasons
    leavin me with a family member now deceased an
    leavin me with nothing left to believe in
    my eyes are dead my heart is cold
    gone with your dearly departed soul
    Chelsea my girl you will forever be missed
    loved and cherished i will never forget
    i love you so much i can't describe
    how bad it hurts deep down inside
    how bad it hurts that you have now died
    how bad it hurts i can't even cry
    it hurts so bad you're no longer alive
    i'll never see you again when i walk outside
    you were always there for me
    i will never forget
    i'll get your name tattooed on my chest
    next to my heart where you belong
    but like pac once said life goes on
    rest in peace
    test
  2. dsp2k5

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    nice drop ...
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    test
  3. INKrypt

    INKrypt New Member

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    i wrote something like this about four years back... and no joke, my first line was almost identical to yours... "april sixteenth two thousand and six"

    keep your head up man. it may be painful for you, but at least she's up in heaven in bliss right now...
    test
  4. CobraMortal

    CobraMortal New Member

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    i like this line especially.looking for a ray of sunshine through the rain. Nice drop. I guess its whatever in this forum I just read someone elses post that was a poetic type flow and I guess it's what ever un here huh. Nice drop though.
    test
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