Hoon - Moonlight (Rough Mix)

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  1. asian sensat1on

    asian sensat1on Masta Tung

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    www.myspace.com/hoon (more shit on here)
    www.soundclick.com/hoon

    I already know the sound quality sucks. Sorry. This is just a rough mix that I recorded a couple months ago.

    Feedback on the song and beat would be appreciated. Drop links, I'll return the favor.

    Lyrics: Hoon
    Beat: Hoon
    Vocal Samples: Jus Allah, Mos Def

    Verse 1:

    As I’m growing older, the world straps on my back, another boulder//
    another day, there’s gotta be some other way//
    its best to bury unnecessary stress to carry, my heart’s colder//
    why the fuck you think I was given such broad shoulders//
    God told us, we were destined to succeed, well I’m blessed to be the seed//
    grown from Holy roots, but the devil’s consoling truth//
    Got us staring at this ecstasy and weed, and we//
    become the next to be deceived, why is it so hard to believe?//
    it’s getting harder and harder to breathe, no it’s not my asthma//
    as the, road gets smaller and smaller to see, we stop seeing it through//
    instead when lost we start looking at scenic views//
    where we spend years of our life, concealed we lose//
    but we gotta move on, pay the debt and it’s too late//
    don’t you know those roads lead to a dead end of due fate?//
    I don’t know why we do hate, to love but love to hate//
    Maybe it’s an escape from the falsity of life we create//
    Life moves faster as we approach the ledge of a cliff//
    And you think you can save yourself with the edge of a spliff//

    Chorus (x2):

    I’m moonlight, light shines through the darkness//
    Stimulate minds, rhymes breakthrough the monotonous//
    Who rock this? They go to war to make peace//
    While we march over break beats//

    Verse 2:

    Now I’ve been nice for 16 years of my life, and I’m sick of it//
    Asking once and giving twice, nobody thinks of it//
    So what the FUCK DO YOU WANT?//
    Another polite response, wuh? To take, break, my pride and my heart, huh?//
    Well, I’ve got nothing to prove except that nice guys do lose//
    Now I understand when I look why the skies sing the blues//
    Cries of the youth are drowned out by crashing waves of the sound//
    That pound out, passing days, through the death drums of the ear//
    It appears that the year has its ways to decay and deprive the aloof//
    of their eyes and their roots, the pride of the youth, comprised of abuse//
    confused, why it takes a lifetime of lies to pry out the truth//
    Tell me mommy why does this world have to be so cruel?//
    Where if you do this and that shit, then you’re just so cool//
    Growing up in a world when, we’re trapped in a whirlwind//
    This not what you made us in, please save us from this state of sin//

    Chorus x2

    Verse 3:

    I just got, to stop, thinking this way, before I’m slipping away//
    sink in the lake, where all thoughts and fears get lost in//
    I gotta, start living today, pour my heart and tears, cuz suicide is not an option//
    In the recording booth, I’m sorting truth through the bass and the treble//
    Cause the resurrecting decibel level of intersecting metal//
    holds more power, louder than any heavy propaganda head will//
    protest signs of end times cry for the ways of the rebel to level//
    the corrupted media, tongue-kissing the fat lips of the devil//
    blue-collars, academia, if we could smile we would//
    cuz you don’t gotta live in the ghetto to have a fucked up childhood//

    Chorus x2
    test
  2. Cardo

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  3. asian sensat1on

    asian sensat1on Masta Tung

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    thanks for the feed. returned the favor.
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  4. asian sensat1on

    asian sensat1on Masta Tung

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    asian sensat1on Masta Tung

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  6. jewbei

    jewbei New Member

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    yeah, i liked this track, beat was nice, and your versus were good!! really liked the jus allah and mos def samples and the end, nicely done!! you use reason, so do i, but i cant rhyme!!
    check out the lastest beat i made, would like your oppinion. keep on keeping on

    return the fav-
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12349686#post12349686

    jewbei
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  7. asian sensat1on

    asian sensat1on Masta Tung

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    thanks, returned the favor.
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  8. ILL.

    ILL. 16 on death row

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    kk beat is cool quiality is decent lyrics are good..overall its a decent track not bad and not like amazing keep it up man


    hit me back up-http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=911585
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