Honour Negro

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  1. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    confusion.. you.. race..
    nations..


    tired, as a people entirely sick of these pretenders
    we're fucked over by caucasian's political agenda
    who's middle finger mentality is pitifully improvising
    i'm opposing your mp's and their liberal sympathisers
    overused platitudes, showing emotions as see through
    merely empty words to me- a product of social upheaval
    look in the eyes of evil, he's probably anglo-saxon
    restricting masses, since his monopoly angle's taxing
    stifling blacks, i'm attacking corrupt babylonians
    soon to burn as a catalyst for fire like petroleum
    know i'm embodying a marcus garvey.. malcolm, martin
    plotting a path into slums and the countless starving
    imparting knowledge of self, an extension of salary
    simply put if we're sharing a skin, then we're family
    not only laurels, my children are resting on anything
    who's thinking is akin to the depths of my melanin

    nubian.. i..
    africa.. life..


    i'm authoring black thoughts that i'm often caught in
    my message- unrelenting till i'm forced to the coffin..
    there're rules to this! ..you're not over colonialism
    'cause my people are suffering a cultural plagiarism
    within oversized clothes, unaware of a single code
    blacks perceiving you represent a new age minstrel show
    patronised heritage, you weren't born into enslavement
    but'll demise black skin deep, in the form of cremation
    'stead of clinging to public opinion and mass digression
    of how the holocausts' invalidating all black oppression
    the notion's ill advised, stupid.. and almost like you could
    draw parallels between the gay & civil rights movements
    ..jews were slain but, i'm past care in this instance
    my focus is negroes, tarred feathered and lynched dead!
    only to live in death.. 400 year patience, ain't here
    united nation world-unity a myth, like ancient pangea

    origin..
    nothing.. infinite.. allah..
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  2. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    huh, good shit haas


    i like
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  3. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Give hima day or so to post his links up
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  4. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    h.wood - stop me
    eloquent poet - a scent from a rose
    subconcious - infeasible comprehension
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  5. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    hmm i liked it was very strong
    but sometimes you just gotta hold nothin back and let it all out and not sugar code anything about it
    its not a secret that minorities are looked at very harshly by some of the "Important" people of our society
    but some of us would love to see racial equality become a reality as far fetched as that sounds...
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  6. flowz

    flowz warrior

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    yuhh this was tight nice piece man
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  7. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    appreciated..
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  8. this was a cool reflective peice. it seemed kinda broad in parts but the rhyme schemes were nice.
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  9. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    I was really feelin the aggression in this piece. Speakin your mind big time in this one. I was feelin the start the most. You just came out aggressin and addressin. Keep the ink flowin ...peace.
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  10. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    damn..this was real nice..kinda makes my mind run.....really makes me wanna get out my pen and write something allong the same lines

    very nice...
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  11. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    look in the eyes of evil, he's probably anglo-saxon
    restricting masses, since his monopoly angle's taxing


    That was dope.. Keep up man.. Where you from in london by the way?
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  12. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    ^east lon.

    and peace on the feedback peoples, shit's important..
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  13. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    like wicked, I was feelin the beginnin the more...but the rest of it was still off the hook...good drop, very passionate way to express yourself and your thoughts...
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  14. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    that was a nice poem. well spoken, definitely a strong voice.

    cool.

    PEACE
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  15. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    def' appreciated xero, chyll

    thanks for taking the time out to peep this..
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  16. SirVEER

    SirVEER state of mind

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    Word, the aggression in this i could really feel from you. Nice flow throughtout, and your message came off unsuppressed.

    One
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  17. BirthOfTragedy

    BirthOfTragedy New Member

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    excellent excellent peice. You are truly gifted in this form
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  18. quotive

    quotive 3

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    I read this a few days back, yo...

    I'm seriously feeling your multies.. and vocab. Thats the kind of shyt I personally LOVE. The content was excelllent. It had a brilliant message, yo... this was hella dope.


    "overused platitudes, showing emotions as see through
    merely empty words to me- a product of social upheaval
    look in the eyes of evil, he's probably anglo-saxon
    restricting masses, since his monopoly angle's taxing
    stifling blacks, i'm attacking corrupt babylonians
    soon to burn as a catalyst for fire like petroleum"

    That is SICK^^ Man, I can't wait 'til I discover shyt like that, I'd love writing some shyt like that... *grows up* lol.. take care yo.
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  19. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    u 3 above me; thanks for the feedback y'all.. this was a part vent, part written, n hopefully the words/content id chosen ekoved a few emotions in y'all, as well as jus flowing well..

    peace
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  20. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    uppin for the sleepers...

    more replies....

    btw im tooshort21 as well
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