Hit Me w/ Diskreet, Verse1ne, A.V.I.

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  1. fiktion

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  2. aiight beats ok, 1st dood first thing that jumps out is you have a nice smooth flow not choppy at all very good at riding the beat, only problem is the vocals r mad muddy son I dunno if U need a new mic...content is pretty good voice and delivery is good... production is ok..digging the strange samples from movies and what not..
    2nd dood nice voice good delivery content is pretty good his vocals sound mad muddy to, who ever is mixing this is could of done a better job IMO
    3rd dood aiight this cats vocals dont sound as muddy emotion is good flows decent content is ok this cats ok
    all in all good collab
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  3. SpoonFull

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    sup dawgie, how u been? my link - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=997880


    the emceeing on the first is pretty incredible. lol, true story. I'm not too impressed by the mp3 board anymore but yeah. First verse got me wanting another collab w/ u.

    2nd verse is pretty sick. Mike Shanoda sounding cat. Flow is good. I'd switch the rhymescheme up now and then. Last line was vicious

    hook is dope BTW, cool scratching

    3rd guy is coming in nicely. Cool flow. Lyrics on some simpleeeeeee but it's all good. Dope verse, it works well on the track

    4th cat sounding dope. No complains. Lead line is dope. "i'm the damn shit" sounded unnatural lol. Im just being picky, dopeeeeeeeeness

    get @ me Fiktion.

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  4. VitaL

    VitaL New Member

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    this one the traccs u sent me on aim before rite????

    fik.. turn ya vocals up a lil more.. otha than that i aint see nothin else to say ina negative manor.. nice verse.. flow was on point.. lyrics were coo

    u kno i like the hook already..

    2nd dude: flows coo.. lyrics could b better.. seem a lil rushed at parts.. straight verse tho.. damn this beat either needah be lowered or raise the vocals a lil higher..

    3rd dude: Iun like ur voice relly.. loll.. flows arite.. turn ya adlibs down .. main vocals needah come up.. again..

    4th guy: Like ur flow.. lyrics are 2nd best on the tracc.. good shit for the most part..

    nice collab here famm.. u kno how i feel bout this already.

    i think ima post will i make it here..
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  5. TWO M.C.S

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    this a pretty good cut here - right off the bat production jumps out at me as needing help - it sounds like the vocals havent been eq'd in any way whatsoever - aside from production, flows are pretty fuckin sick - solid all around

    not a bad cut - somethin I'd probably spin a few more times

    holla back

    heres my link

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=997789
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  6. fiktion

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    ^ Thanks dogg.. and you`re right, I know absolutely NOTHING about EQing. If someone would like to give me a crash course it`d be greatly appreciated, holla

    aim- fikti0n
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    Got the links
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  7. fiktion

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  8. ceson

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=999381

    first dude flow was nice.i could tell that from the jump,..deivery was ight..the vocals are kinda funny tho,they have a odd effect on them.
    2nd dude-flow was ight,delivery was pretty nice man..lyrically he was alright..quality seemed alittle better.
    3rd dude-this dude was alright,lines were ight...didnt impress me as much as the others but he did his thing...kinda rushed at sum points of his verse...
    4th-this dude was coo,i like his voice..lyrics were alight...flow was alright...he came alright..

    hook was nice...scratch hooks are usually a nice touch...

    overall this was coo..quality could b upped alil bit but yall did ya thing...keep workin on ya music...

    return the feed if u can...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=999381
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  9. Bin.Ladin

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    your page down right now.. i'll brb.. gonna rate something else then come back.. i got u...

    check me out though - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=999635

    nevermind here it go

    Listenin... hmmm

    Beat.. iight.. not my style though

    First guy... Lyrics... pretty good.. decent delievery, started off soft, finished koo..
    Flow was pretty good

    Second guy... Lyrics... decent shit.. decent delivery, vocals too low on both of you, maybe its cuz of my head phones... flow was iight

    Sample hook, is iight...

    Third guy... Lyrics... delivery different from the others, nice R.L Stine line... I like this guy, definitely nicest on the track... Flow was good, started rocky picked up

    im gutter like a rain spout lol...

    Concept... 3/5 .. not bad

    Overa... 3/5 .. decent drop

    check my song out - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=999635
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  10. Extacy

    Extacy Better Known As Lantz

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    i like the beat sounds cool, deffinetly a lil different.

    1st verse -sounds good, flow is steady, voice is good

    2nd verse -a lil nasish, sounds good flow n voice are both cool

    3rd verse -flow is good voice could use some work, lacks the confidence n presence of the 1st 2.

    4th verse -a step up from the 3rd verse, flow n voice are alot better, good job

    hook- scratching and sample choice is a lil sloppy

    overall the track needs some work. the hook, 3rd verse n maybe the quality a lil.

    thnx 4 checkin my track

    later, Lantz
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  11. Ben Official

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    beats cool

    sup fiktion you faggot

    shits tight yo... your style killin it

    2nd guy is aight

    hook is dope, im guessing it was already in the beat tho

    if not, props

    3rd guy, ehhh its cool i guess. nah its gay actually. nah its cool.

    good shit

    oh no theres a 4th... if hes the same guy on the 3rd verse this ones better. if not, decent.

    yours was the best by far, mathew

    atta boy
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  12. Verbatim

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    I see you have my fellow AP member Fame Famous on your top 8...he sucks


    first dude...flow is real fluid...delivery is good..real strong....vocals could be raised or he could ennunciate a lil more so I could understand the lyrics more...good shit from what I heard though

    second dude...not as polished as the first....still pretty nice....can notice the punch ins though..thats a pet peeve of mine...unless they are done purposely..lyrics pretty cool

    third cat...delivery is cool...flow is ok...lyrics not as good as the first 2

    fourth dude..flow and delivery is good...lyrics are ehhh....ew a lot of generic forced punchlines........everything else is on point though


    pretty cool joint overall
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  13. fiktion

    fiktion *******

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    ^thanks for the look.. and yea i just got myspace, so everyone ive addeds probably in my top 8, still gotta make a nice page
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  14. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    beats ight not really my thing
    first emcee got a good flow, sounds smooth, vocals are a little low not to much tho, some lines ok liked the ppv, you got a pretty good sound tho real smooth just up vocals a tiny bit, feelin it tho

    2nd emcee is ight, flow isnt as fluid but still doin ight, same thing with vocal volume, haha i liked the we driiivin slow, with a blunt etc etc, other then that it was ight you comin together with it, just keep at it

    third is ok flow is not much different from 2nd, both are ight not real fluid, lol @ rl stein line, you got some ok lines nothin real special tho but ya flow came together toward the end, i think last line slightly stretched, other then that it was proper

    4th is ight, you all kinda fall in with the sound you bringin, almost like a group, he came ight not the greatest lyrics, i didnt like how it ended, but flow is also comin around same with last 2 emcees

    i think the 1st emcee held it down most, the rest kinda followed suit no particular order, ya'll comin into it tho just keep at it
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  15. fiktion

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    no doubt, thanks
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    One for the money
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  18. Mellow Madness

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    The Player Wont Load For Me.. I Know A Lot Of People Had That Problem..

    Anyway Of Linkin Me To Another Link?

    Thanks.
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  19. fiktion

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    Check the Soundclick link up there. One of the two hopefully works for ya
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