Whats up poets? I'm new to the board. Im not trying to battle nobody I just want to get feed back on how I can be a better poet, down the bottom is one of my latest poems so if its not a bother hit me up with some feedback ok? ~PisceanzDream~ I’ve never been the type to go crazy over a ***** But I’ve never had anything as good as you Or at least that’s what I think now I may come off pressed, but please believe me I’m not I’m used to bein spoiled and getting what I want I’ve seen you a few times and you haven’t tried to jump my bones yet, It’s something about you, I must admit It’s like bug, and I’ve been bit I’ve looked for love and at one point of time I thought I found it But now I wanna know if what I think is love, really is love Cus I figured that if what I think is love, really is love I wouldn’t be in search of more Nevertheless I wouldn’t have found you, feel me? I’m a confused little soul, and I’m young I know people say I’m too young to find love or I’m too young to know what love is But I wanna know, they aren’t me they don’t know what I know It’s kind of funny, how I’m tryna figure out what love is, but in the midst I found you Coincidently your lookin for love too, Spending time with you makes me feel all cozy inside I get a feeling with you I don’t get anywhere else, is that a sign Could it be that the love you want, is the love I got? Or could the love you have be the love I need? I’m not the rushin type, so you got good points tryna feel me out I’m just tryna move on with you and advance with you. We shared a kiss, one thing you taught me was You can tell how the person feels about you through the kiss Well was my kiss telling you enough? Cause I’ve been hurt before so all my feelings are a bliss You get to know some, but you don’t get to know all I’m a secret kind of chick so what you know is what you get But to advance to the nitty gritty of my feelings you gotta be willin to take me on a whole individual not as a big breasted 17 year old you see in front of you I honestly feel that you see beyond my 36 DD’s and see the real me That’s what some people fail to do You made a good impression on me, and a good one on my heart for some reason I guess that’s a start, just know this I’m feelin you I really am, I’m willing to build something with you That is, only if you let me So answer this, Are you ready for me?