Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by Bash, Oct 13, 2004.
I'm actually feelin' this one a lot mo' than the last, buhh it still needs some work. For one, you gotta learn how to mix. None of yo instruments have been mixed, and there is no reverb or Chorus effects what-so-ever on any instrument. The melody is improved, but like I said on IM, not every note sounds good with another. Smoothen out the hats and clear up the snare and kick, and this beat will be fire. I'm not sure if I heard a bassline, but if anythin, clear it and turn that up. Keep uppin', you gettin' better.
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^Thanks for the feedback. You didn't hear no chorus effects because the beat isn't finished yet and it does have a bassline.
Upping for some more feedback.
that bassline is wack...shoulda just kept that sample plain with some raw drumwork.
The intro sounds outta tune.
The thing that works is the drum pattern
But that bassliine doesnt work with the sample.
i think the melody on this joint still needs a little work on it, the best part on this joint is the drums i think, they bang well, and it is a good mix too
Check out mines
Sounds like some old school living legends shit
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