"HeRe We Go" feat. Ced Hughes - NEW SHIT! - LinX Please!

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  1. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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  2. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    up...you sonsabitches...
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  3. Da Protégé

    Da Protégé The P.R.O.

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    Returnin favor...

    Flow is rediculous...nice... emotion is mostly perfect.... both flows are wow...nice... lyrics are dope... I like the whole yard to yard deal takin turns rippin... chorus is coo... weed isn't my deal but its all good... ********** was nice...

    Props...overall quality was decent...and the beat was coo for what it was...and you all killt it...

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  4. .The omen.

    .The omen. Member

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    returning the favor... beat is real cool, jazzy and bouncy, first dude comin up is real nyce, good flow good confidence... now ur up, you got a good presence for sure man, this is gettin slept on, hook is pretty cool, u again, jo'es appartment hahahaa, lol, u fall off a tiny bit at this one part, dont like how u end ya verse, but still cool.. i didnt hear ya boy spit this time before the chorus kicks in again, hook has some over dubs off a lil bit, now other dude comes in again, real nyce, he is smooth with tha flow... now u come back in again, im likin tha presence on how u come in... panther... damn ur delivery is sick on it, def got skills... how long u been flowin? lol at the end lol how many times thats happend to me n friends in a cypher... good shyt man no doubt keep it up
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  5. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    not feelin the beat too much
    but both of you killed it
    flawless flows , real kool
    no complaints really, chorus was aight, but still kool
    keep um comin
    thanx for gettin at me
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  6. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    beat aint bad kind of plain

    flow is on point from both of yall...delivery and pressence could be polished

    hook was a little sloppy but i like where yall were going with it

    this shit was pretty dope, yall got an tight style and can ride a beat nicely

    keep doin it
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  7. N-TeLLigeNt

    N-TeLLigeNt aka Novill Da Truth

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    the beat is cool............The flow at some points needs to be enhanced, the quality aint that great either, but its not horrible. I like yall voices too. N i liked the lyrics i could hear.

    Peep: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=909303
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  8. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    returnin the fav-

    beats pretty cool....first cat, flows pretty strate...could use some more polishin....lyrics are tight, cool shit...delivery could use work as well, try enunciatin words clearer and boostin the energy level....second cat sounds better....flow is pretty good, mostly on point....delivery is good, u complemented the beat nicely...could use a lil bit more polishin tho....lyrics are dope too....i like how u guys went 8 bars back n forth, sounded good....overall, this was a pretty nice track...u cats def got skill....keep spittin that illness...peace
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  9. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    appreciate the constructive criticism y'all...more's on the way...
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  10. Trinidad-

    Trinidad- The Hidden Truth

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    iight returnin the love here

    iight beats comin in ...feellin it kinda like a wu typa beat
    first cat needs to work his clarity like his flow needs to
    be polished a tad
    u comin in rippin it...ok the beat just went in the right speaker...didnt
    sound right...overall this was a good track
    yo holla at me for a collab man im feelin ya style
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  11. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    thanks fer the feedback...i'll letchoo kno whats good wit a collab...still figgerin out this equipment and program...
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  12. Cardo

    Cardo Im Extra Scary

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    BEat is ill, first dude got an ok flow but gotta work on delivery, you came in nice ill flow an lyrics some good shit,, chorus is nice too.... only thing is toward the end the chours seemed alittle off, cool track though

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=909542
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  13. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    preciate it...we'll fix the hook...might even do a comlpetely diff'rent one...

    keep it comin...
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  14. Flic.

    Flic. N.O till I G.O

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    beat is aight.

    1st cat is aight, delivery could be stronger.
    2nd cat feeling his voice alot more than 1st. flwo nice,,feelin it

    hook is cool. it works

    1st cat(moon) feeling it like 1st, i like it.
    2nd cat is cool but he sounds kind of borin at times with his delivery.

    overall this was good
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  15. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    thanks yo...hope you got to hear the last two 16s...i think that nicca ced ripped me on his shit...

    uppin it fer mo' feedback...
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    skyyyy rockets in flight....biewwwwwwwwwwwww!....afternoon deLIGHT....
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    1st page material
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