Here is a song I made entitled, "Pink."

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  1. J Keeper

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  2. Geedorah

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    Im not feeling the intro, would be much better without it.
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  3. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    i like the video gamey intro, but it doesnt fit i didnt think. They sound too different

    but nice work man
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  4. J Keeper

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    Well shit the intro is what I made that led into all that other shit haha.
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  5. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    well i think it doesnt fit because it just ends, then a new song starts. Theyre both good.

    maybe if it blended into it the main part.... it kinda ends and feels out of place
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  6. billy nomates.

    billy nomates. rain cancels play.

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    the intro is definitely the best part. expand that into a song.
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  7. J Keeper

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    God damn it, Nom...
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  8. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    liked thanks for sharing ya work

    3:25 to close was nice and relaxing
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  9. J Keeper

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    Thanks dood!
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