Help with rapping...

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  1. The Crafty delinquent

    The Crafty delinquent New Member

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    I like rapping but i never feel like my raps are up to par. Like everything rhymes, i just dont feel like it should, having everything rhyme. What should i do to write better if this isnt good? And off the topic is there a way to help writers block? Thanks, the verses are below


    1) im the mystical reaper, Of some shit I cant speak of, got these rhymes pressed like I was making some t shirts.
    2)rhymes kick like Adidas, nigga fresh like a fetus, enslave you mentally, you can forget about ya freeness.
    3) but I believe all are free, until you give em some power. Manifest destiny, whats yours is ours. Stacking bread like a tower, when she sucking she scour. Got the power of any caliber on the hour.
    4) rhymes penetrate quickly. Enter your membrane slickly, rhymes vinatge like im 50. Status, achilles.
    test
  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Post your stuff in the appropriate section and they should give you feedback

    Welcome
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  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    You wouldn't happen to be an "astrologer" in disguise, would you? :scared:

    Welcome to RM..
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  4. The Crafty delinquent

    The Crafty delinquent New Member

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    idk man
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  5. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Aha..
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