Heavenly Heroes...

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  1. __LyR1cAl1__

    __LyR1cAl1__ New Member

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    This one is in memory off all tha pplz who gave their lives fightin for our country.......



    Heavenly Heroes

    I saw an angel dressed in shades of green,
    The light behind him so bright he could barely be seen,
    We stood for a moment in a silent stare,
    I placed my hand over my face to avoid the glare,
    When I looked again there was nothing more to see,
    Thats when I felt his hand on me,
    On my shoulder he placed it and behind me he stands,
    He spoke to me as we stood on the sands,
    He said "I fought for our country for people like you,
    Please remember us all and to your loved ones be true."
    And to this day I will always know,
    I am being looked after and blessed by a heavenly heroe.
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "I am being looked after and blessed by a heavenly heroe."

    Not sure why you're being slept on, maybe because you're new or you need to make more feed for others. Now, as for this piece, I found it original and very creative, I was feeling it from beginning to end. Not to long and not to short, just write for me to not be sidetracked by my surroundings and just stay focused. Great piece, mos def. My blessings..
    test
  3. Infonation

    Infonation Info for the Nation

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    I like it, it deals with modern day info and it lets the nation know how the people feel. Infonation loves to here info from other writers and exciters. To listen is to gain knowledge. We all need to remember are fallin heros, let's not forget them, AND let's reply to dis cats shit, its down ta earth on the real.
    ^ I gotcha blood
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i like it....different from the rest of the drops in the realm lattely......gotta respect a piece like this....

    UP
    test
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