Heads or Tails?

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Clarksvegas_Dan, Jul 14, 2004.

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  1. Clarksvegas_Dan

    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    Really, No seriously
    Naw Naw seriously
    Honestly
    I swear
    I promise
    truthfully
    sincerely
    I mean it.
    I do
    I really really do
    You too.
    I do too
    cool
    For sure though
    Alright I believe you
    If you say so
    But how do I know
    Oh
    Well that could mean anything
    Or maybe not
    I don't really know
    Honestly
    Seriously
    I do
    I promise
    How can you tell
    Well I really didn't put that much...
    Alright
    Yeah...I'm fine
    I do too...
    Yes I mean it
    of course
    Can't you tell
    What's wrong
    Oh yeah that
    Well it's cool
    Do you
    Yes I do
    I always knew
    It is too true
    No really
    Seriously
    Honestly
    What do you think
    Oh wait maybe I can see
    Maybe we both can
    Is that you holding my hand
    Is that you helping me stand
    My legs are weak
    seriously
    I've been sitting all week
    Meditating...
    Really, honestly
    No don't worry about that
    You're not getting fat
    Or that either
    or that
    I do that too
    Stop freaking out
    It's okay to shout
    Honestly, truthfully
    I do
    And you do too
    Good that's great
    Well, I can't wait
    I don't know
    What do you mean fate
    Yeah, I guess that makes sense
    Then shouldn't we carry it out
    to it's fullest extent
    When you write something down
    Do you consider only the event
    As a solitary message
    To one audience sent
    Or is there more than one
    effect
    How do you perceive it affect
    Well, I was being serious
    No I mean.. Yes
    Yes yes yes
    I mean it
    Of course I do
    Yes even then too
    Always I swear
    I'm telling the truth
    Well, yeah, sometimes I do
    But If I do
    It's only for you
    I do too
    Well, I certainly hope that is true
    No really
    Honestly
    Seriously
    Truthfully
    Sincerely
    Unconditionally
    I do.

    Just a quick keystyle.....replied...I'm not what I think, Too much to say, Sky...later
    test
  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    I like the whole back and forth conversation part, even tho the reader was only able to see your side of the convo and it isn't the clearest of what youare talking about, but I have a few ideas. I like the way it was constructed, good to see a style like that in a piece hit the board up.


    Stay Up, Much Love, Peace
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    I wasnt really feeling it [dunno]. I guess I couldnt get into that much.

    one luv
    test
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