Happy Veteran day burn wax on my candle got and ax by

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  1. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    Happy Veteran day burn wax on my candle got and ax by
    The handle ready to chop wood soldierly crop good do or die
    Give a true salute to the new recruits that comes in harms way
    And be armed everyday ready to do battle if need be, alarms play
    A part in our defense veterans are alert and involved do an expert
    Job of protecting the US, with knowledge and ability it’s hard work
    in habitats alone known as combat zones the use of missiles, pistols
    and rifles it stifles the enemy in the vicinity no identity in dismal
    war, stay in contest or struggle bless to juggle freedom and win
    deadly conflicts, every November it’s time to remember to men
    and women that give their service and life HAPPY VETERAN DAY
    Woke up this morning a feeble troop bold with a legal loophole
    Occasional trend is like a glacial wind its cold as people unfold
    Took my medicine right away on this veteran day time for dinner
    A divine winner at Apple Bee’s, get great satisfaction when I enter
    A state of action which involves food my job is to elude olives
    Brisk hype prevailing but dislike failing so I’m nailing ears to
    The wall yall, my personality dealing with a deft wreck have true
    Feelings self-respect who else can collect these kinds of apples
    We got some odd lames using god’s name to hate drink Snapple’s
    And chill out on that, battle with troops of iron and a group of lions
    Came out on top and now remain hot holding a knife on Mt Zion
    My bling ice amuse it’s a device used to blind folks along with
    Rhymes and quotes online with the hopes of it being a great gift
    Never write silly quotes and like Billy Goats I’m butting fools
    Using my horns as cutting tools so smart I be ducking schools
    Get on the microphone in the hood and knock dirt about a good
    Hot workout, fight habits try not write on tablets fire in my notes
    With the desire to promote funk, no hope for junk it just floats
    Away, see the slumlord pay rent I’m lost really cost right need a vent
    With exhaust pipe brain smoking, pay check stay wrecked and bent
    Can’t recover, society is a battle like a variety of cattle it stampede
    Revamp and feed on the master pastures of one’s knowledge and creed
    Like a body of students I’m taught by teachers and fought creatures just
    To remain safe, now I’m in Apple Bees getting free food and I must
    Not be rude now see a chick have to be quick the cutie seem alert
    Booty do extreme work in that mini-skirt don’t get a date I’m hurt
    For her lace I’ll crawl now playing baseball have to make a shortstop
    And get all sorts of props chick got a yummy cake it looks so hot
    Not crumbly or fake she’s sweet indeed her body can meet my need
    At the bar she ordered a fat brisk sandwich, ready to follow her lead
    Put me at a disadvantage couldn’t proceed sitting to far away this
    Going to be a bizarre day got handles like SADE love talk and a twist
    May get me there, bet she have a strange address her boy friend have
    To change the mattress after sex she’s so wet down there ready to grab
    The kotex anytime wanna a cake date can’t wait must try deft to apply
    Myself with sweet talk she has a unique walk her sexy lip gloss is fly
    This could be a vast task so much class in her past ready to sing a lullaby
    This girl strut that butt like it’s going out of style no doubt wild I’m on
    The right route let me think awhile, my scripts phat like a diplomat strong
    Her lips all that and a bag of chips my dewrag rips from thinking so hard
    Need stony action and like TONI BRAXTON must play my card
    and just be a man about it, not to be frighten because I see exciting
    things ahead her lips so red trips to the bed’ll be beauty so inviting
    this chick got class ready to stick some fast love words in her ear
    will occur sincere because I been here checking her out oh dear
    it’s clear I really need a date, can’t justify my action dust will fly
    in satisfaction from bedsprings while yelling oh baby I don’t want
    to cum oh she jest give some and say cum on hun not able to front
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  2. bagglad

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    Like water my rhymes spill while my mind filled with admiration
    Could build a nation with cement and bricks a mad situation
    It thunder when rapping I wonder what happened to respect
    Havce deep insight can’t sleep tonight my dreams been wrecked
    crowd the worse a loud burst of boos no applause for show
    been to the park in the dark just to practice and try glow
    stats keen at the scene of a rap concert one sprite good to go
    hear quiet chuckles and a diet buckles my weight, it may take
    a prizefight just to rise tonight so recognize the fright and hate
    in my eyes don’t be surprised awight gonna be a tight debate
    romance twisty after advanced publicity its hard to escape
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    I salute the flag, respecting memories of the fallen.
    Air, land or sea. Ops, Infantry.. I mean all'them.
    call 'em what you want, the gift of life's what they gave to us
    So i praise 'em cos, otherwise we'd be in chains and cuffs.
    So if you blaze it up or stand at a memorial when the daylight comes
    as long as you're not forgetting & you're honouring their life-span
    because they put us before their own sons & daughters, their own wife, man -
    How would it feel, knowing the next time they lay eyes on you
    maybe the same time, when there's no more day light on you?
    they stayed loyal, bullets whizzing by, grenades exploding on a turf
    so our families didnt have to be those thats erroding in the dirt
    I know that shit can hurt, watching your comrades fall
    Best friends in the morning, the next day they're gone.
    Still they never took a step back, kept charging on the enemy.
    So like i said, I hope you keep on remembering their legacy.
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    Here we go again..

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    Im sick of you motherfuckers ignoring us, i'm going to petition to have you outlawed off the internet. Diddy just called me and said it was a hot 500 that my boy just dropped, you're jealous.
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    in a tall dismension ready to call attention to shapeless it's hard to escape this I come like SNAKE BLISS in ESCAPE FROM NEW YORK like Isaac Hayes I despise it for days If I see a girls's breast I'm gonna reach but right now got stress in my speech guess its best to teach HIPHOP
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  11. L u c y

    L u c y (Administrator) SWERVE

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    you quite clearly got outshone - sorry bruv
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  12. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    + Rep for keeping it real.
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    ~Dead~
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    Resilient. .. . ..

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    :idontbelieveu2:
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    WO ,,
    I did not read the whole thing wont lie ,, I read chunks at a time and skipped a lil ..
    not because it was too long , but because you had no slashes , aps , periods , spaces , and the flow had no consistant or noticable pattern for me to follow
    so it was all over the place in some parts..

    now content was incredible .. I respect what you are saying I grew up in a military fam and I tried to join when I was 18 but had to many tatts in the wrong places
    .. so respect on the topic

    the rhymes were cool at some parts , and like I said before ,,, others just fell off terribly ..
    if you want to convey a message better .. "rhyming" or " Texting " ...
    slow down a bit cuz its not audio ,,

    have some spaces for us to read with ease and not have to catch a new flow every few bars ....
    but good drop and like I said .. respect
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  17. bagglad

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    thanks for the props everybody for real
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    qoty?
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    No one REALLY gave you props you waste of GB.
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