Handle Ya Business

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  1. Poetic Pain

    Poetic Pain I Am Hip Hop

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    I'm sick of seeing ËËËËËs smoked out
    With fresh throwbacks, and new kicks
    When they don't have the fuckin sense to take care of his kids
    I can't respect no ËËËËË who can't take care of his own
    Whenever I do become a father
    I swore on my soul I would take care of my child until my soul is gone
    You ËËËËËs ridin around in old caddilacs listening to new tracks
    When yo baby don't have a coat or a hat
    You blame it on ya baby moms
    ËËËËË you made that baby too, so you in the wrong
    You know the words to all the 50 cent songs
    But you can't spell your baby's name
    ËËËËË you a bitch, your whole lifestyle is lame
    You should be ashamed
    And you got the nerve to disrespect ya baby moms
    She doin you a favor by not taking you to court
    So she can see some child support money in her palms
    Claimin you was just tryin to get some pussy
    ËËËËË you is a pussy, you ain't no man
    A real man takes care of his kids
    With the baby in his arms, and the bottle in the other hand
    It pains me to see girls pushing strollers lookin lonely
    Sayin "He used to love me, now he don't want me"
    This is a fucked up situation
    And your baby is the primary witness
    So ËËËËË act like man, get ya shit together
    And handle ya business
    test
  2. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    AMEN! all the brothers our there need to hear this. great job at expressing this idea to the fullest, because this is truth... i hope every guy sees this!
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  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Yeah truthful shit, well i just think every guy who dont know how to handle they bizz should read this. I takes care of my kid lol

    one luv
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  4. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    nice piece.. truth! i liked some of the ways you expressed your point. good job.
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  5. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    nice.....

    Once i get a child i def take care of it no doubt
    it's like another half of me i will love it so much i will never let it go nice job and every guy should def hear this nice job keep writing
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  6. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Raw, simple, well put. The message was put forward in an appropriate manner. What is meant by that is basically, writing in such a grindy, gritty way - like what you're describing is very 'grindy' and 'gritty' in a way...ya dig?...

    ..well anyway..

    ...resp...
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  7. D.B.

    D.B. Death

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    droppin' some knowledge huh...nice piece...keep it up playa
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  8. Infonation

    Infonation Info for the Nation

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    You got that magic touch. Nice lines and very nice delivery, on some real shit. It's time for us, as writers to stop livin our own life's, by writing what we've experienced, but to express other peoples situations, who don't have the talent to let their pain go, threw writing. Nice drop blood, like what your doing.

    ^One
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