~H20~ Vs G hyp

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  1. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    ~H20~




    How can i walk in your 'shoes', when i have your 'legs' in a box like chicken drumsticks?
    Nobody's 'feeling' your 'cocky' style like you was having numb sex
    He's been listening to too much elton john- he re-mastered his whole track we wonder where he got the words from!!
    G hyp couldn't feel my second punch cus he got knocked out by the first one!

    He's probably elevating tryna beat his own record but he's still slower than the worst one!
    The only way g hyp can be hot is by going through me and that's only AFTER digestion!
    His weakness motivates my questions; so the only thing his weakness can step into is MY suggestions!
    Kid fuck your punchlines they're more transparent than a kid with no arms replaced with plastic bags!
    Fuck your your word play- it looks more played out than a street with 50 kids Kansas has!

    LIKE WOMEN WHO LIE THEY GOT RAPED
    Your probably A fine hot 'food' BEFORE the trial, but your just 'shit' afterwards
    Because your not winning any 'cases' like CD albums broke kids cant afford
    Your just Gay Hyp but without the 'E' you have no 'HYPE'!
    The only AWARD your winning is a death 'CERTIFICATE for having the shortest Life!
    I'm on a diet cus i've been eating you so much i never bothered brought a knife
    Kid i find it embarrassing to say your name- it's con
    You aint hot after you go through me- i take you out quicker than fire like i'm burning leprosy
    YOU AINT FUCKING WITH WATER, without me you cant live- and your just diluted pepsi!

    Your songs is alwayes on pause and rewind 'ju-ju-ju-just like a kid who stutters the most!
    And i wanna double k.o like 2 guns up so after i beat you? i'm killing your ghost
    G hyp aint ill he's just dying after '3 posts'

    If g hyp used his head to write his lyrics.....then he's just ripping a hole in his own paper
    I blew his head up so high so he can see God now- and his other half can see God later
    You get eaten like cooks testing food on a taster, i serve you out cold like i'm a lazy waiter

    i strike this kid like Violater- and and rip his asshole into action like women with a vibrator
    - your writtens is getting merked cus my spits 'Murders Inc' like an Eraser
    G hyp cant spit like me instead he burns he's tongue on a taster
    When i send you to God you'll really be 'floorless' when i hit you like Stun gun lasers
    I might suck to you but like vaccuums when i take you out i leave no tracers

    I got yo whole crew on my dick like a Shish Kebab
    and i spit so hot, the only inherritence you carry is burns...you'll have to cover your face like arabs
    My bars are loose like prisoners out of jail so when they knock u i cause violation
    Rip your head off and stick it up your ass like a vibrator- so you can feel yourself vibrating

    my bullets are grown men, rippin through your ass to break 'her'


    You can't come at me in one piece- people just say you TRIED and only give you a compliment when you come in hundreds...

    pieces


    Smh fucking faggot....g hyp aint a 'match' his just 'outnumbered' by his own body parts- like his ego got cucumbered

    Let me add few more to that

    'G hyp aint seeing shit after i hit him cus he just got cuccumbered"
    Your just falling like rain- because my static is 'thunderous'
    Yeah this kid is already played OUT like a chewed up tape put on eject
    He's the opposite of rap- his a christmas gift opened before christmas a 'Rap reject'
    Like a marathon, g hyp tries to beat his own record -by throwing more punches to himself like 'reflects'









    'G hyp aint seeing shit after i hit him cus he just got cuccumbered"


    ^^^(woman put cuccumbers under their eyes)


    Your just falling like rain- because my static is 'thunderous'

    ^^thunder makes rain fall




    daughtered
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  2. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    G hype





    You don't +stand+ a +chance+ even if you're literally on a monopoly board
    in fact, you're more +pussy+ than a room of cats and heavy whores
    overrating yourself - no one gives a DAMN about your drops
    you couldn't walk in my shoes - fuck, you ain't even close to my socks
    +h2o+? you flow evaporates with no condensation next to me
    shit, your style is more +ass+ than a pile of Booty Talk movies
    Homo? 2 Obvious - i owned your name in one rhyme
    but how you gonna be spit ill's bitch when he ain't online???
    you're the type of person to think +layaway+ is a good-bye bj
    being that, suck my bars and move on like the rest of your teammates
    even with more +bars+, you STILL can't +lock+ me down!!!
    and verses were noisy, not even your style would make a sound!!!
    I set traps on K. Rydaz so now they're riding on flats!!!
    damn...your shit couldn't kill even it was a suicide attack!!!
    all the lines you've posted couldn't rip a molecule!!!
    just like Carrie - at the end, "THEY'RE ALL GONNA LAUGH AT YOU!!!"
    and these are just punchlines - imagine me just throwing punches!!
    cause i'll hit you so hard, I'll make your flow need cruches!!!
    fuck, i'll spit SARS at you just to make your style sick!!!
    so sick, it'll even make +spit ill+ cover his lips!!!
    it's a happy trip! that's why i +laugh+ and +fall+ over your diss!!!
    this ain't a battle - it ain't even close like a dyke and a faggot!!!
    if matter were over mind then i'd be crushin your thoughts!!!
    so the next time you think, you're gonna need more than a 100 watt!!!
    i took this battle by a mile - even a blind man could +draw+ the conclusion!!!
    you were losin before started - so what the fuck did you plan on doin???
    i could of killed you with one punch, but instead i'll use a back-hand!!!
    so go back to where you came from before I get Bush to flood your land!!!
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  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    im not judgn til u do 2 things.. cutt off the lights n shorten that..
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  4. SwItChMinDeD

    SwItChMinDeD ~SWITCH~

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    h20 u same one from freestyle forum wit xorcist an broinker?
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  5. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    nah his from rapworlds


    i just posted it up here because the votes over there is slow

    aight lets vote people
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  6. 3 $TYLE

    3 $TYLE New Member

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    Think h20 came harder
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  7. THE 1

    THE 1 THE 1 AN ONLY

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    who gon read all that shit
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  8. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    LMAO comone guys atleast read 1 half today and tha other half tommorow lol

    comone man this kids waiting on me
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  9. Rabanne

    Rabanne New Member

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    H20 for me
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  10. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    Aight thankz kid but breakdown ur vote then u can get ur rep point


    REP POINTS TO EVERYONE THAT VOTES AND BREAKS DOWN THEiR VOTES

    Aight
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  11. Etebom

    Etebom New Member

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    I'll take the best 'to me' from each emcee and judge accordingly.

    H20::

    LIKE WOMEN WHO LIE THEY GOT RAPED
    Your probably A fine hot 'food' BEFORE the trial, but your just 'shit' afterwards

    ^^LMAO...dope wordplay..lmao

    G Hype:

    even with more +bars+, you STILL can't +lock+ me down!!!
    and verses were noisy, not even your style would make a sound!!!

    you didn't have me off a my seat with that one..o.k punch tho..


    Vote goes to :::H20
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  12. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    ^repped thankz for voting


    lmao...everybodys gonna wanna vote now

    1-0
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  13. High Kill

    High Kill I'll Be Dat!!!

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    this is how i saw this one

    opener-H2O
    flow- G Hyp
    structure- G Hyp
    creativity- H2O
    punches- tie
    personals- n/a [ain't been here long enuff to recognize any]
    ³³³³³³³³³³- H2O
    meta's- H20
    closer- G Hyp[ couldn't find the flow in h2o's]


    H20, i believe your verse could have been better, seem'd you tried to squeeze too much into your lines, this takes away from your flow as well as punch effectiveness, try shortening them up, that should help

    G Hyp, you got the structure down, you just need to work on more complex themes in your punches, most were a bit too simple, and the grammatical errors made it a difficult read in some spots

    best lines:

    G Hyp-"all the lines you've posted couldn't rip a molecule!!!
    just like Carrie - at the end, "THEY'RE ALL GONNA LAUGH AT YOU!!!"

    H20-"i strike this kid like Violater- and and rip his asshole into action like women with a vibrator
    - your writtens is getting merked cus my spits 'Murders Inc' like an Eraser"

    overall vote- H20 by a public hair
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  14. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    ^repped thankz for voting 2-0
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  15. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    uppin this battle


    FREE REPS!

    upps
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  16. 3 $TYLE

    3 $TYLE New Member

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    Lemme up this 4 ya
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  17. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    uppppppppppppsssssssssssss
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  18. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    spit ill could possibly be the worst rapper ive ever heard in my life
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  19. *Spit ILL*

    *Spit ILL* h.stackz killa

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    its jihad already?!

    I dont do audio so no one has heard me rap before

    but im really good
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  20. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    ^^^ i guess ill take ya werd on it homie....anyway have i seen u before from back n the day???
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