Gremlins

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Craccer_Jacc, Dec 9, 2003.

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  1. Craccer_Jacc

    Craccer_Jacc SudAnillyst

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    listenen for the echo's
    damn echo's laughen at me
    ticcle the receptors of me
    then the laughter quikens and ......
    and it quikens.....
    it's gone and i am left lifeless in this tomb.....
    consumed with that laughter that was me .....
    cant be .....
    the night Gremlins stole my Sanity
    test
  2. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    wow no u aint wacc at all this was nice very nice i really actually like this deep but sad
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Wish it was a lil longer. I couldnt really get into it.

    One luv
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    man i want more......nice drop u got here but its sooooo short..lol

    good to see u back man....gremlins..lol

    makes me wanna see that shit.....
    test
  5. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    I wish this was longer, just because what you had up there was dope and I wanted more....anyway nice work

    much love

    peace
    test
  6. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    yeah could have been longer but very good for what you have here
    test
  7. quruxley

    quruxley SHHHHHET MAN!

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    night gremlins stealing your sanity...thats interesting =)..i agree with some of the others..this would've been better if it was longer..it felt like it just suddenly ended..nice anyways
    test
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