"Grand or Die"(trap or die free) (drop links)

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by BestMove, Sep 1, 2005.

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  1. BestMove

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    im from jerzey son
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    i can feel the love from all my fans :(
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    typin as i listen...

    quality is horrible, lol, you should learn how to mix, but other than that, this was pretty cool, flow is nice, lyrics are good, some cool punches in there, good multies, beat is cool, kinda slow though, overall this was a pretty cool track, up your quality and your delivery and you'll be straight. pz.

    and yeah, i'd be down for a collab, holla at me on aim.

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    lol wrd @ the quality
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    I agree about the quality, you gotta mix the shit better. The vocals sounded way loud, but I'm listening with headphones, so they might sound allright on proper speakers.

    This beat sounded pretty gross on the intro, but it gets a lot better on the verses and your flow sounds nice and comfortable over it. The slowdown around 1:40 was cool. Rhyme scheme is nice. Lots of multisyllabic bars. The lines were pretty good for this kind of track, feelin' it. Overall a little short.

    But, yeah, you should search Google for Capheine's page and pick up some tips about mixing. Basic shit like proper compression and a little reverb would make this sound a lot more clean.

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    yo if any1 is down for a collab that might go on my mixtape holla at me on aim = Cuc0Monstr0 - by the time i record the mixtape ill have better quality i think/hope
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    ill stop upping after ONE more reply
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    yeah i peeped this earlier dawg ... im an honest motha fucka and i appreciate the positive feedback you gave me and i honestly hope to peep better shit from you ... first off the quality is ass ... you sound like you have a lisp or too much spit in your mouth ... and ya voice overs are horrible ... if this really IS a freestyle ... its not bad at all ... youre not horrible ... i wanna hear a MIXED track from you and then i could give some real feedback ... cuz honeslty this shit is nothing special at all ... especially that part when you slow down wtf was that about ... u jus sound funny ... you young and ofcourse got alot of growin to to do ... my advice is spit shit you can relate to ... write it and make a ill track or a verse and mix better ... than holla @ us.
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    beat is amatuerish...alotta static on tha mic..plus your too close..rhyme schemes are iight but repitive..subject matter is tha same ol same ol ish...you gotta find your own style an personality if you wanna make it in this game..but disregarding all i jes said its not a bad track
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