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Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Jaiz, Sep 23, 2007.

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  1. freed the kreed

    freed the kreed Whats good?!?!

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    Up...I havent forgot to return the feed...I had to get new speakers...
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  2. ShortfusRecordz

    ShortfusRecordz Independent Label

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    This sounds pretty raw, could use some polishing, but the realness is pervasive, and that what gives your credibility, once the talent is polished, credibility means more than most give it credit for...feel me?
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  3. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    lol word
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  4. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    sorry you weren't feelin' it bro
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  5. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    I guess people decided to stop returning feedback
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  6. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

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    alrite right im really feelin the delivery on this, beats nice, lyrics are deep.
    hook is nice.
    only thing i can think of it to say for feedback would be to pronunciate a lil more, might be the accent though, just some areas where i couldnt understand even though the deliver and flow was slower. other than that keep it up damn good track

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1068547 holler back
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  7. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    thanks I'll hit ur thread up in a bit
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  8. James_G

    James_G Concious Coalition

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    i like your voice, you have steady and always on the beat flow, altogether delivery was ill, for this type of track, and the mood was deep i liked it, and thanks for the feedback, stay up.
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  9. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    sound a little bit like dave chapelle doing his tupac impression

    beat decent once the drums drop, i'd rock it with a different sample besides that piano

    i dont really like your accent...your delivery is good and everything...i like how your not rappin about some dumb shit...ur rhymin about some real life stuff that means somethin to u, real music...u should try and rhyme with your natural accent as much as possible...u might be trying to sound a little bit southern or your southern and youre trying to hide your southern accent idk 7/10

    return the favor please thanx..
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1068646
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  10. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    thanks for the feedback

    this is my natural voice though i was rapping with a deeper tone to my voice than usual. I wasn't trying to sound southern though I have been told by a few that I have a southern accent. I will hit u up in a bit.
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  11. Pious

    Pious LET ME LEAD YOU......

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    yeah the song was "ok" thats it, i think you did stretch some words to go with the beat, anyway in my opinion you need some work, the beat is ok too. i guess i was hoping for more
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  12. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    accent seems really strong... qualities nice... flow's on point... lyrics are nice...not really feelin teh subject matter tho... but you were doin ya thing... i just prefer something a little harder in general
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  13. Pass-Werdz

    Pass-Werdz WerdzMusic.com

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    the beat is hot .. I like the slowness of it ... you definately did ya thing ... flow is on ... lyrics are pretty deep ... something about your delivery that I don't like ... can't pin point it but other than that solid track dawg...pz
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  14. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    thanks for the feedback :)
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  15. reazson

    reazson New Member

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    voice is...different...
    real smooth...really feelin this right now, emotion steady and perfect throughout
    damn this shit is calminnggggg...this is one of those songs that you can listen to over and over again...
    tried to download it...but I dont have an account for soundclick
    good listen man

    can you return the love? http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1069229
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  16. 4Dbling

    4Dbling Smoking weed > Shooting H

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    very sick

    keep it up
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  17. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    word thanks
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  18. A R R O W

    A R R O W Emcees Propaganda

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    whats good man, i listened to this track i love the samples in the beat. pretty simple flow, works on this. quality is dope on it too. you sound like you got some southern influence in you. works on this though, nice deep track

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  19. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    works on this? lol never heard that terminology before. What is it that your saying I need to work on? Anyways happy thanksgiving fam
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  20. freed the kreed

    freed the kreed Whats good?!?!

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    took a minute to get back at you...my bad on that one bro...i think u rode the beat real cool, the only advice i could give or feedback is that you kept the same tone throughout the entire track which made it get boring through the verse...it didnt keep me hooked in ... the hook fits with the track...yea, this track is cool, and smooth....its got great potential bro...
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