Going off on tangents

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by troubledwaters, Sep 1, 2010.

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  1. troubledwaters

    troubledwaters New Member

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    I got new fam, it's True Man, it's a must I'm feared
    Give me a dollar and I'm the father, the buck stops here*
    See I came to flip off the flyest, piss off the titans
    Piss on the tightest and give hip hop the Heimlich
    Kids thought it's dyin', with all the dope rappers that are steppin' up
    It just sneezed a couple of times, it happens to the best of us
    See, it's the opposite of the placebo effect
    The scene is correct, but people think it's a mess
    Just 'cause a select few planted that seed in their heads
    You can complain about the radio and the media yet
    Ignore all the positive things emcees bring to the set
    No one likes everything they hear, that's the deathly truth
    Shit, there's parts of the culture that upset me too
    But dwelling on the negatives will never come to settle this
    So let's focus on what we like, everything else can be irrelevant
    Compared to me, others are weak with the mind, my speech is divine
    Like there was a prophet who sent me
    I don't look it, but I'm more hip hop than your average kid who talks incorrectly
    You can't not acknowledge the knowledge that I'm droppin' on emcees
    Tell you what's what, my message is uncut, but when it's polished the gem gleams
    I'm too unpredictable to get stuck with a label so no one on your roster can get me
    Fuck baby steps, I went from playin' rec to gettin' tossed in the big leagues
    Nothing short of indescribable, callin' this brolic offends me
    Change from hospitable to hostile at the drop of a pin
    Don't even think of a battle, trust me you are not gonna win
    Get locked in the pen with a God among men
    And you'll be deeper underground than Aristotle, Farrah Fawcett and them
    Oh damn, the kid is off his rocker again
    If I were you I wouldn't even try talking to him
    8th wonder? No, I'm the 8th deadly sin
    I didn't barge through the door, they let me in
    Just to find that I'm great, a fucking ape repping men
    Like "Shit, I guess we have to redefine the A-list again"

    *I don't like explaining my lines, but this is too complex for it's own good (no, I don't think that's a good thing).

    I got new fam (a new crew/new family members), it's True Man (Truman), it's a must I'm feared
    Give me a dollar and I'm the father (It takes next to nothing to convince me to run the crew), the buck stops here (the sign on Harry Truman's desk, it's the highest responsibility, and the "buck" (dollar") stops with me, as in I'll always be the leader)
    test
  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Haha i never seen some one use heimlich in a rap before! Ill shit son! I digged that! Good sylablic format! Now crush em!
    test
  3. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    This was pretty dope all the way through... A llot of quotable lines in here. Good scheme, flow was smoothe.

    Well done
    test
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