Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by lyricalpriest, Jan 5, 2011.
LoL.. you go first broseph
NOT yet listen(im new and you just disrespected me by putting my name as GODsgenital, so i shouldnt even reply to u, BUT, BUT, im going to destroy you) ok
lyricalpriest stand down, im GOD"S GENERAL, reconize the rank,,
you must understand that no man can withstand the divine tank,,
my voice moves soliders in masses, towards stampedes and clashes,,
we leave hell's ashes litterd with sands and glasses,,
my mind is so inclined, that just small signs rinkle my mind so define allowing me to see divine shine,,
i said too much, i need no clutch to defeat this disrespectfull lyricalpriest, just give me the win and end this blasphemy before its preeched,,
see im like the good darth vador, lyrics like a haymaker from fedor,,
my army rides for the savior, destroy all those who oppose GOD's favor,,
your only worth 8, half
everyday i praise the lord, for this jagged sword made of horns,,
never the beast, you should fear me more before you cease,,
or wait i just killed you, i must of wrote that in my sleep,,
dont mean to disrespect a priest, im sorry RIP.
dont say im DQ,,,cuz you didnt post no rules...your turn
the reason the second post on this thread is edited is cuz i wrote "made off horns" instead of "made of horns" my bad on that..just wanted it too be clear
you new here, so lemme introduce you to the community
you don't get diplomatic immunity you still owe your dues
your puny but your not granted impunity
and your narrative
aka "battle verse"
you used for me
was clear and lucidly wrote
well enough to distinguish you aint chewing me.
as for an elaboration, this cat is faking, acting like he god, but infact
if your gods general, and that makes you Michael, i still would suggest "no body give a mic to this psycho"
but it's fact your not the arch-angel, nor a dark angel,
god doesn't impart favor
toward you because he is not able.
not because he don't got the power because your not favored
you don't represent him or his kingdom your distraught stranger.
your a forgot thought player, you should just got shot hater
quit with the quick drops wankster before you get hit with the tick tock
times up for u ho, rhymes suck you should know, if you dont give your rhymes up,
then time sucks for you bro.
need some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gods general yo verse was good, but it didnt seem that much like a battle verse. slick rhymin though...
lyrical had more direct punches,...so unless yall go another round
lyrical got this one
thanks for the vote Bar...much appricated...i respect your opinion..
i dont know lyricalpriest, if u wanna go another round its up too you, but im cool with waiting for more votes...good verse lyrical, i dotn mean point out things in your verse...thats just my opinion...you got 1 vote..good job bro...it was a pleasure to battle you...much respect
we can go another round.. it's good practice.. and..
im not trippin u pointing out my rhyme scheme.. it's all good.. i've been writing for years. im confident with my shit, i got music online.. but for some reason it ain't working. myspace page. anyways.. when i get it fixed i'll link you..
um..its cool...i will drop a quick 10 here in a few...but yea man...i feel you man...just writting doesnt account for your flow and how your voice carries itself, so i dont doubt you, i would love to hear your music man! keep making that shit, and keep pushing it...good shit man..yea just hit me up with the link sometime.
battle verse time-- Bars sorry to leave question on my battle rhyme, i think you want me to just bury this bitch and cover the body in lime,,
dont worry i got lyrical weaponary, sharp skills slice and kills exceptionally, leave lyicalpriest in segments like a centipede,,
i dont leave battle wounds i leave ya in pieces, each word explodes shit, covering you in feces,,
lyricalpriest reads this and gets into a rage, your skills arnt evolved, they belong in a caves,,
my mind so powerfull you could surf the brain waves, there is no escape'n me, well i can say jesus saves,,
i blast big bullets with ballistic incinderary tips, you cant spit my lyrics they wud burn your lips,,
same things goes when your suckin my dick, cuz after this, your dismissed, Bars this battle verse isnt just slick,,
im winning promise in conflict, im the GENERAL thats my job, i dont politic,,
your injured, but this aint a movie, you cant karate kid crane kick, im a wrecking ball so heavy the crane bent,,
call me the landLORD, make you pay coming in this thread, call it rent, i mean for heavens sake your fake, im heaven sent,,
did some one ding the bell is this guy tryna hit me?
fucked up i got face the autistic version of 50
(this is fifty tyson)
fucked up i gotta disgrace this un-artistic version of Whitney
(generel still waiting to exhale)
his junk gets dump trucked I wouldn't suck even if it was me Vs. a Titty..
this lil Diva acting like he The general of god and the Land Lord
he gone be claiming he captain planet and lord of the rings?
you persona look gayer then butt sex
ps. this whore doesn't sing all he do is discuss stress.
and i'm having a hard time believing he raps neither. He 86grade gassed up
and im 100% ether! turn him into a non-believer after His Creator allows me to
lead him to the heater!
since this guy get's to use "big bullets with ballistic incinderary tips" on his princess
fairy shit, i think its appropriate i get to use rigged explosives and precision radar blips
to track and locate the exact spot im bout to blow up this little bitch!
And if you gotta collect it ain't me paying rent... Im short selling real estate it's your dumb ass that's in debt!
were we supposed to check in again? sorry if i went to soon...great verse man...may the best lyricsist win...good stuff ...VOTES would be appricated
no.. thats just how i strded my vs lol
o ok...i got ya..good shit!!!
Yea Im feeling GODS verse more then lyricals ..
too bad he wasnt really comming AT LYRICAL ..
lyrical verse was on topic , no good lines really but on topic
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