God Dam Can A Man Get Some Feedback?????????

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  1. Lusius

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  3. Lusius

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    Aight no doubt homie... Done... I broke it down into verses to... always return wit good critique not some. its good bye type shit

    THx fams

    PEace
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  4. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    ur pretty dope man...

    i was feelin that track...dope flow and shit....


    good shit homie
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    The Rippa RIP is the name!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. Lusius

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    Feedback returned dawg... thx for the support - respect

    Peace
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  7. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    "egotrip"

    this is sick.......beat is so BananAS wow
    lyrics are dope 2.....multi and wordplay are hot...
    no complaints just props.....who do u have mixing your shit...
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  8. Flic.

    Flic. N.O till I G.O

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    Beat is tight

    Ur voice is iiiight... Flow is tight ..but Im not really a big fan of like 3 multis in one bar cuz u cant really feel the lyrics plus it just sounds cluttered at times.. thats just me though..There really wasnt anything that distinguished the chorus from the verses also... Some of the lyrics were good though

    But overall this is nice i didnt turn it off prematurely so thats a good thing
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  9. Lusius

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    I mix my own shit... and to affliction.. agreed... except if you read the lyrics you would see that it does infact make sense, but to catch everything i say and put it together aint for the meek at heart haha j/k but thx for feedback mos def... will return the favor, thats respecet


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    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    u mix with what
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  11. Lusius

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    I use cool edit pro, behringer Ub1204pro, Behringer b-2pro condencer, behringer Sharp DSP 110 FeedBackDestroyer... Thats about it, no mastering programs as of yet... waiting on prod to hook it up
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  12. Lusius

    Lusius Kaamil

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  13. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    1st off good lookin on the feedback appreciate that also 1st offf beat is crazy ur flow caught me off guard shit was whoa im real big with flow if the flows ass i turn off song but u had that shit ina headlock on this and ur others that i peeped delivery sick as well like the subject and how u ride it out verses are all equivlent none better none worse all same calibur was feelin that kept me tuned in hook catchy overall banga hit me up sum tim e will collab pz
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  14. Lusius

    Lusius Kaamil

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    no doubt, thx mayne
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  15. Lusius

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    Ima up this^^^
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  16. Orange407County

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    voice is ok...beat is coo..not really my steez tho..too upity i guess...flow is coo, lotta personality in ya voice...nice delivery..quality is nice..the hook is ok..not that great...i'da maybe went anohter route..seems like u tried to hard to keep the multi's and it affected ur lyrics in a negative way..

    over all tho a pretty coo track.. keep doin ya thing fam
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  17. Lusius

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    word thx fam... this the first track Ive done in alongtime, first solo in 2 yrs... so I just wanted to get it done... and start droppin collabs... thx again, peace
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  18. SALVDOR

    SALVDOR Delyreeuz Owns Me

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    ight peepin


    i think i've heard this beat before.. its dope


    ooo.. i like the energy.... quality's kinda ehh... hi's are a tad sharp (i.e. s's, t's etc)... but im diggin the flow...... delivery is pretty good... scheme is kinda smashed up u dig.. not enough clarity on some shit cuz it too fast comin ... gotta work on that.. but this is dope.... im diggin the set up of ya lines...... i guess this is the hook comin....

    on the hook u should do pan vocalz too.. to thicken it..and make it stand out.... but sounds good .just look towards doin that in the future


    2nd verse.... oo got better.. when u slowed it up.... made the delivery up in my book.... content is good in this verse tooo


    hook =- same thoughts


    3rd verse.. - scheme is dope in this..and the speed up double time.. sounds good.. just gotta polish up the clarity u dig.... but def got some skill on ya


    overall im diggin this

    do a remix of this track..and open a verse for me..and i'll merk it

    lol.. holla kid .. do ya thang


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  19. Lusius

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    thx man most def... Im sure there was another verse available on the beat... Ill re-spit this one of these days and get back at you... Peace and thanks for the feedback mayne
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  20. EpicLipz

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    meh its ok. haha
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