getting started

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by scroggins, Dec 29, 2013.

  1. scroggins

    scroggins Member

    Dec 4, 2013
    I'm starting to write actual songs with a hook and all that jazz... All I have is a few verses and bars right now

    while I was spittin my opinion kids were bingin rum sippin til ya head spinnin
    don't get it twisted I get it twisted I get it lifted to a point
    where I can still have a conversation
    please remember everything in moderation
    in this modern nation christians live for money yet the dollars satan
    isn't that a contradiction? I'm not saying you're not a christian
    I mean because this world you got it twisted

    the worlds stuck up the worlds fucked up
    smartphones and tv's to keep the world hushed up

    i hope the world learns money doesn't make the world turn
    it makes the world burn

    these obviously don't all come together but I'm workin on it, what do you think so far. I'm also having a really hard time making a hook... idk why

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