Get Back... [Leave links!!!!!!!!!]

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by P-Kwut, Aug 17, 2005.

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  1. P-Kwut

    P-Kwut Tha Kid P

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    www.soundclick.com/pkwut_music.htm
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    rough draft.. prolly changin the hook around.. add sum more verses... but so far tell me how it sounds.. leave ya links and i'll def hit em up..
    pz
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  2. Erattic

    Erattic New Member

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    listenen..... beat is dope.... ur voice fits it.... cool... flow is kinda off for the most tho... delivery is cool...... lyrics are cool... they pretty real... hook is cool.... i feel u could have sped up ur flow a little bit... thats the only flaw i see right now... cool drop...

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  3. V.I.K

    V.I.K The Feedback Returner

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    Gotta tighten up that flow. You stress and de-stress words at the end of ya bars, from what sounds like you tryna make up for lost space u coulda threw another word in. Try re-arranging the way you say things to make it flow better. Lyrics for the most part, are good. They could use work, cuz they have to do with your flow as well. Same could be said about ya chorus, it seems a little choppy. The good thing is, that u've got down the concept of a song, and i understand this is a rough draft. So these are problems which can be fixed relatively easy. Definitely go back and correct them, and im pretty sure this track would be dope. Keep writin. Ez

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=917450
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