Garden of Eden (Spoken Word)

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by IAmDonoTg, Aug 30, 2012.

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  1. IAmDonoTg

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    I love spoken word.
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    I can appreciate the written process of this, and how it clearly poses the story of what happened in the beginning after creation,

    but at the same time I don't think your voice is any good in this. TOo monotone and pitched, though delivered well. I felt you presented basic knowledge of what happened for the ignorant masses to identify wit. But you could have taken this deeper and given it more. What happened in Eden was profound, and many, many spiritual and basic truths could have been expounded on. That's the difference between 75 views and 100,000.

    But that's just a thought. GOod stuff.
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