Discussion in 'GRB - '13 Grand Royal Audio Battle' started by J o o k, Aug 10, 2013.
good looking out @buzzooka JOE soild drop hommie
@The_K3 when you posting? Im finished and ready to post brother man
damn ya'll be ACTIVE i just started writing 2day
I think K3 is out of town and will be back Monday.
i have trouble making my bars relate-able 2 ppl since my mind be on some otha shit a lot of my punchlines go unnoticed due 2 comprehension issues of the masses
anotha thing is i been digging deep since i dont know any of ya'll on since i am new to this site but my personals imo will also go unnoticed since ya'll probably don't know the shit im digging up on my opponents
Sugabezy sounding nervous
ot nervous but shit last round nobody seemed 2 really appreciate the time i put into digging up info for personals and my cali swag got misconstrued for flowing off beat
just got back to town right now.. ill see what i can get finished tomorrow i have the day off
I ended up having 2 do otha shit 2day and ima be gone in the wind 2morrow so just like last round ima cram it all into the last hours on the last day lol
So write that shit more clearly. If they don't hear every line you aren't setting it up right. Set it up like a joke. Don't be afraid to pause. Don't be afraid to emphasize a line. Less syllables, more jokes.
thx 4 the insight @DZK since im new 2 battling im still tryna figure out how to do this - i am used to topicals more than anything and honestly im not that funny - aggressive yes funny no
@xddrx , if you're digging up dirt and no one seems able to appreciate it or catch onto it, you might should consider a different approach in the way you deliver the information. Don't too-too overthink things; though, you did afterall win the first round.
The thing about you that stuck with me the most was the most genius line of passive aggressiveness of all battle, when you were talking about his past and you said "we wish it didn't happen."
Shit made me giggle, I dunno.
aight good looks bruh its hard not 2 over think it knowing how bad i need that money
Im done with my shit, just cant mix for ass.
Fuck waiting, Im posting, Going in.. time now.
Fuck it, got to round 2 and drew another 'round' garbage kid
That bit Bux's style and threw a hundred pounds of lard with it
Why does everybody sound the same? This is awkward shit
Every damn verse is the same person, just opposite
those bars killed me...so much truth behind the second two..
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