fuck you

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  1. Seneca

    Seneca edgeknowl

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    Close my eyes picture a world outside looking in
    So many cowards marching with demons again
    Struggling to strive nothing left to be blessed with
    Scared as a youth happiness seems like a far myth
    Everybody’s blinded to the reality of their souls
    Another figure falls unknown life story untold
    What’s this hopeless life expecting from us
    Merciless glares from every angle dark & relentless
    Everyone’s pride is bound expected to be dismissed
    Shadows grasp my atmosphere future I lack
    Trying to survive without fear I march without looking back

    Every stumble I feel thorns wrap around my spine
    Unable to enjoy the morning’s mist as a sign
    Yesterday’s shadow lingers in my frail footprints
    No way to survive without destroying our innocence
    Feel a million abortions in one subtle breath
    Grasping my friendships with nothing left
    Nobody speaks the same dialect it’s all rhetoric
    Interrupt every sentence with a personal vendetta
    The wrath of memories will vanquish our lyrics
    We all leave footprints in words or ignored motions
    All we have is ephemeral suggestions & expressions
    Begging for attention everyone’s forgotten in the end
    There are not hearts big enough to live within
    Fuck waiting for life & a cursed god to amend
    I spend my days in an invisible cage with visible rage
    An alcoholic bleeding tears from a shattered mask
    & Tonight if the world dies I’ll be the last
    Left behind in the walls I’ve built around my child
    My child the one I see when I look in my eyes
    Shaking, decrepit there he is staring directly at me
    Wondering why I prominent such a enemy
    But we both know in this mind there’s nobody
    I’m alone it’s because I choose to kill myself
    Silent & subtle took five minutes during my childhood
    & With one blink scared forever bleeding till
    Nothing is left but a long sleepless night of regret
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "Everybody’s blinded to the reality of their souls
    Another figure falls unknown life story untold"


    Great lines there, I'm surprised this piece was slept on as bad as it was. Overall, I was feeling it, feeling the emotion of the whole ora of the piece, the topic that you wrote of. I found it as good as any other piece on the Realm, yet not the best, maybe in deliverance of emotion, it could come in top fifteen, other than that, I found it to be just another nice piece dropped by a Realm member. My blessings..
    test
  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    wow, 2 poems with the same title... lol.

    "Fuck waiting for life & a cursed god to amend
    I spend my days in an invisible cage with visible rage
    An alcoholic bleeding tears from a shattered mask
    & Tonight if the world dies I’ll be the last"


    strong words... i wish peeps would stop sleeping!
    test
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    emotion was strong in this piece. never seen you around here before, but i hope to see more from you

    one luv
    test
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