"From Grizzlemania to Fiscal Failure: The Real Madillz Story"

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  1. JohnnyTrashh

    JohnnyTrashh New Member

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    I am currently writing a 1 man play, about 1 mans struggles and dreams to manage a Subway while running the worlds largest battle league.

    Any dialogue suggestions? What has madillz said to people, to who?
    It can be one line, or you can invent a whole dialogue exchange...
    Suggested occurrences to include??

    Thanks B.
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  2. Met-A-Forikal

    Met-A-Forikal Time, cunt!

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    Dead.

    Maybe Eyerate'd like to contribute on this one. Send a PM.
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  3. martymcfly

    martymcfly Well-Known Member

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    this would be a perfect off-broadway vehicle for benicio del toro
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  4. Met-A-Forikal

    Met-A-Forikal Time, cunt!

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    I was thinking more for Patton Oswalt in brown face. There could be a Tony in it for him.
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  5. KBomb

    KBomb Dopesauce

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    im diggin this idea. maybe one of your similes at some point could be: "the back of madd illz' neck was sweating like the condensation trickling off a pack of frozen hotdogs being thawed."

    you can use that
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  6. ChickenAdobo

    ChickenAdobo Call me Bryan

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    "you fucking bitch motherfucker"
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  7. sorryplayer

    sorryplayer DonutsOnTheDash

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    ^^^ deaddddd
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  8. martymcfly

    martymcfly Well-Known Member

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    :smackmeanmug:
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    Mike Rigs Active Member

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    Rep for the first person to make a battle smiley of the back of mad illz head (neck rolls included).
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  10. JohnnyTrashh

    JohnnyTrashh New Member

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    Dead at everything in this thread... Getting a good storyboard from all of this though. LML
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  11. serge

    serge Well-Known Member

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    I really do hope that Avo makes that documentary.
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  12. mdk

    mdk i dump and i sprout

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    Use this.
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  13. illipsis

    illipsis Ill Collector

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    Have some scene with young Madd Illz looking up at the sky and seeing a gang of hot air balloon pass by.

    "They were giants in the sky, floating bulbs of canvas casting monstrous shadows across the Earth. Looking up from my terrestrial vantage, I felt smaller than I ever had in my life. When I saw those balloons, drifting by on a mournful zephyr I knew I had to rise up, cast my surroundings aside and ascend to those stratospheric heights, finding the peace I so craved in one of those wicker baskets, that much closer to God's embrace. Like Icarus, I would later craft wings in the hope of ascension, and like Icarus I would fall under the weight of my machinations. I am Madd Illz. This is the story of my rise and fall."

    Madd Illz as a tragic hero.

    Me as a pretentious fucker.

    Let's get it.
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  14. martymcfly

    martymcfly Well-Known Member

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    i didn't know you were so poetic

    this is me right now
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  15. robodick

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    this is like the ecw dvd:

    ecw: the rise and fall
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  16. Bleach...

    Bleach... Put me in your markers...

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    I dunno about dialogue, but there should definitely be a scene where somebody is ordering a sandwich from him, and their decision making process about what to put on the sandwich is a direct reflection of the direction of Mad Illz career/Grind Time.

    Symbolism on deck.
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  17. Bleach...

    Bleach... Put me in your markers...

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    "Maybe I want some avocado on that sub... But I dunno if I can afford that... Hmmm oh well, might as well get it and then not pay you for it at the end."
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  18. JohnnyTrashh

    JohnnyTrashh New Member

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    Bleach that was hilarious, I will definitely put that in the second act... the finale gonna be him punchin daley in the face 'Is that your wife son?'

    You from Sydney Bleach? You seen my battles?
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  20. IKNOWALL

    IKNOWALL Well-Known Member

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    you sure this isnt the Kap Kallos or Lush One story?
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