Friends

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by PeRsPeCTiVe, Jun 19, 2003.

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  1. PeRsPeCTiVe

    PeRsPeCTiVe New Member

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    this was something I wrote quick, its kinda short...ah well.



    Friends are the ones u trust, the others aren't close
    Friends are the ones u love and put trust in the most
    Friends will always be there, the others come & go
    Friends will always be friends & be there to let ya know
    Friends see things u wish never happend, the others laugh
    Friends see you succeed & when u slack they bust ur ass
    Friends never leave ur side, the others seem to hide
    Friends never bend the truth or even think to lie
    Friends can be girls or guys, the others are all the same
    Friends can stay at your side & help u stand tall through pain
    Friends rarely ignore you, the others do it on purpose
    Friends rarely use you, the others only like the car u purchased
    Friends are part of the family, more like a brother
    Do you have a Friend? or are they just like The Others?
    test
  2. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    hmmm it was simple but i liked it...your perspective of what a friend should be and i agree with most of your descriptions and of course there are always more to add....kind've asking us to take a look at the people around us and see if they are truly friends. good piece.
    test
  3. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i'm not a fan of pieces like this.......but this wasnt bad....just not the type of stuff i like....kinda simple 2....but hey..what do i know...[dunno]...post some more...would like to see some different type stuff from u...

    UP
    test
  4. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    hi :)

    this is the second piece i read here today that sounded like a hallmark card....its all love......keep writing and growing
    test
  5. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Simple, qaint and just there!

    It was what it was. And i liked it for that if nothing else. The message also of course.

    ..resp..
    test
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