Friends or Enemys?

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by UFO the Phoenix, May 25, 2003.

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  1. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    I think all my friends believe in GOD
    But they don’t want to listen to him
    Rather fulfill their own wishes
    Handling personal business with evil intentions
    Hurting people with their twisted images
    On what Life is.....
    I’m so sick of this
    Rather it’s my classmates, associates, or even “buddy list”
    Sooner or later the friendship turns to ugliness
    Once I see their true colors hiss
    Beneath the surface of there skin
    Many of my so-called friends appear soulless
    No feelings No emotions instead empty and bogus
    I’ve come to notice that everyone is focus
    On themselves using whosever the closest
    To get their wealth
    They move in stealth
    The type that look for GOD when they need help
    Selfish in the physical lacking in the spiritual
    How I’ve come to trust these certain individuals
    Has left me puzzled-yo
    So called home boys turning into my worst foes
    Every time I get close to God’s goal for my soul
    Walking down that narrow road
    I have to stop and recover from the backstabbing blows
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "The type that look for GOD when they need help
    Selfish in the physical lacking in the spiritual"


    Excellent how you portrayed how people seek God, when only THEY themselves need help. Selfish and somewhat hypocritical at times, as well. Hypocritical, because individuals say, "I love my God, I pray for you." Then, they pray for only themselves, yet still get mad when others do it, too. Stupid, I can't even explain, because that actual situation is nonsense itself. Anyway, a very nice piece, because also you explained what you thought and what your opinion was. I learned from that and I thank you for the enlightenment. My blessings..
    test
  3. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    A raw exploration into your own feelings on a subject that is usually dismissed by societies around the world (some places more than others..)..

    ...yet of course, though it had a personal rawness to it...it was no so much so that the i didn't feel what you were saying...i.e. it was depicted well, and along with feeling the subject very much so..it was quite a piece for what it was..

    ..resp...
    test
  4. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    very likely to be more true than you would think people
    it has been more popular to have a knowing of what God is
    but most dont go further than that
    wich is why you put this one up i like that
    speak up you all
    say your peace on this piece

    good stuff zortan of scimyis
    test
  5. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    thanks for the love ya'll

    I'll see if I can write another one...I dont write poems much just alot of rap songs

    PEACE AND GODBLESS
    test
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