Freewrite- LIFE...

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  1. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Smh!!

    10 years ago I use hang with younglings
    more like gremlins mommas called them gizmos
    Zimmermans shoot them how they see them
    Hoodies and chucks appearing to be hoodlum,
    where is the love, somebody school him
    tell him he a minority too,
    ask him why he shoot him
    he’ll probably mumble under his voice-
    because he look like a thug
    and this is when I fall to my knees and pray
    God send us a dove,
    I don’t want our kids hunted by sellout predators
    where white and blacks be haters
    this world is filled with racist perceptions
    the devil’s advocate -call it -the media entrapment
    we ain’t right, hate on hate, only feeds evils ways
    the hearts of men got twisted ways
    so why do I could continue to pray
    and bark scriptures your way…because I keep the faith
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  2. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    8bars max now in effect
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  3. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    The start of the 8barMAX

    I’m shaolin kicking in the doors of life
    & you can catch me at my panicle living life
    What is my sacrifice? That hater and that bitch
    I can’t stand a snitch, so I back flip to Van Dam split
    Pull my six shooter hollow points that chip bones quick
    Sorry if you can’t follow my lava type reptile spits
    I so indecent, for the proposals, I offered your bytch
    I’m feeling like magic, as long as I got a grip, illness ain’t shit
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  4. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    yup, with non stop plots we brought lift
    on that slug drop tip with trunk knock hits
    for real mc's, doctors, even punk rock chicks
    stop by and drop some thought if you equipped
    I been flowin off the top since a crew topped kid
    hit me up to kick a track if you got this
    or this musics in your heart, where hip hop lives
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  5. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I’m trying to hit tip top and my dividend stay on flip flop
    so incomes the money plot, I got to get that currency spot
    and stage performing is only for that entertaining prop
    what I do now is not amusement kids, it’s a hobby drop
    seeing phonies plot be diversions, tell em to stop
    fluent hate be spewed at the kid, thanks for making me hot
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  6. ComptonRiLLO

    ComptonRiLLO New Member

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    life, fuckin sucks, without my son, stupid bitch, kept um,
    left um, without a chum, a buddy to cuddle up, run amock,
    and love. i miss my son..

    smile so bright, like the sun, flashin, like a gun, got em gaspin, like they run,
    fight the pain, hold my tongue.. but i can't.. fuck you bitch ass..
    calm down rillo.. nah FUCK THAT, I OUGHTA BUST GATS AT YO PUNK ASS..
    BABY MOMMA.. FUCK YOU. TAKE YA HEAD AND DUNK THAT,
    YOUR FUCKING LIFE, YOU FLUNK AT, WHERES YOUR DUNCE CAP?
    STUPID BITCH, MUSIC IS, THE FUTURE FOR THE CUTEST KID,
    TO BLESS EARTHS SURFACE, ONE SECOND WITH HIM IS SO WORTH IT.
    I LOVE YOU SON. FUCK YO MUMS. PUNCH HER STOMACHE, RIP HER TONGUE OUT,
    CUT IT, DUMP IT, SLUT IS, A FUCKIN BITCH, FUCKED MY FRIENDS,
    I SHOULD KILL EM ALL. I HATE THAT IM STILL INVOLVED IN HER LIFE!!
    CUZ THIS CYPHERS SUPPOSED TO BE ABOUT MINE!!
    STUPID BITCH GET OFF MY MIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  7. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I spent half an hour making up my mind
    spent half an hour writing out my rhymes
    what can I say; I’m patient in this realm of hate
    and sending my haters to the burning lake
    is a love hate faith, what’s our fate,
    decisions to make?
    upshot to the hate,
    buckshot to a snake
    eliminating hatred is my purpose and fate
    I can’t afford to make mistakes, I love cake
    and to watch is rise and fall is insufferable to date
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  8. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    this shit was nice... original and on point..
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  9. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    I'm running through life with stuff stuck on my mind
    Under the strife and pain, and it covers me, blind..
    To feelings of love, I rewind, sitting here wondering why
    I can't have empathy for any heart other than mine
    'n it hurts every time I stare in the mirror, actually..
    I can see the pain and hate glaring right back at me
    Stuck in a bind, so I hide in the covers
    'cause life may be tough - but God damnit I'm tougher

    Just freewritin'
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  10. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    So..
    I met the girl of my dreamz, knodding off into reality;
    The matrix of passion, eclipsed the sun of my galaxy.
    Her dark matter perception had me chilling like black ice;
    Visual perception is evident to have u paying the price.
    Blinded as we bind wittz while scoffing at the universe;
    God controlz what happenz, but our love templez the church.
    A multi-universe of ecstacy is like String Theoriez connection;
    Whn joined heartz run out of time, they're gone off of love n secondz.

    Easy shit..
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  11. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Life is shit right now, here’s a little insight how:
    My bitch has cancer, no telling when it’s lights out,
    My music’s advancing, I’m getting used to the fans thing…
    But half the artists in this shit hole and I have a huge misunderstanding,
    But taking it to the streets is something I won’t,
    Their hate runs so deep cus they suck and I don’t,
    They question me like I don’t remember what the fuck I wrote,
    There’s shit rappers everywhere trying to cut my throat,
    My kid’s barely see me, shows every weekend,
    My bitch needs me, but by the time I’m home I’m sleepin,
    The label expects devotion, so music’s priority till the next is chosen,
    So I spit fire till my breath is smokin, and your head’s explodin.

    The things I do for you…
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  12. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    My code too raw so I hit the scene like smog..
    I’m no angel; more like an archangel dogg
    I’m flying high letting my ballz dangle y’all
    It’s Sunday and I’m cooking up yummy
    out on the deck looking at mountains hommie
    drinking something potent, smoking Yoda
    my chick soaking that lover, I can’t wait to dig her
    plus I ride with that g-40 and that bitch Nina;
    she ready to lay a hater-
    she wet sheets
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  13. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I hit cyphers hard like the da vinci code;
    nigga I inspire the meek
    I take it higher and higher like wild fires,
    so I spread through the tier yelling
    at all those haters dwelling in here,
    get the phuck outta her
    we worked this cypher for years,
    kept it alive with the real
    phonies came through but didn’t survive 4real
    I guess they got lost trying to find their self
    My mind on stealth, and I’m getting wealth
    But lately I found myself taking stress to death
    Asking for its demise, open ya eyes; I’m fresh to death
    passin life’s test without troubles
    sorry lames for bursting y’all bubbles,
    I slash rivalries, who stay despise"n" me
    I'll leave em eyes dying in front of me
    this real life stuff up in here,do or die, no fear,
    tongue’s sharper than Zulu spears
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  14. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    Sometime i wonder what is afta' life
    cuz' niggaz sellin they soul,neva'knew it had a price
    like they neva' knew we had a christ
    i aint preachin',but am i right?
    I roll tha blunt n pass tha dice
    but am i right?
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  15. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    only God can judge us in this wicked life we in
    a toss of the dice, it's snake eyes and sin
    so crushed the head of that snake so triflin
    let them false naysayers recognize the might of men
    I love this life I’m in, but some nights,
    I might be caught misbehavin..Uh
    I be the 1 backsliding, I’m so wrongdoing
    I’m only harming my soul it’s starving for..
    Biblical feeding, truth leading
    I’m on my wrath surging
    up to those misleading types
    I could leave them bleeding right
    But then my soul a’ still be trite
    off balance like the cerebellum
    when struck by that nine parabellum …
    dogg somebody better tell em..
    God please change the life we in
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  16. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    can't change the plan so i plan its change
    burn weight'n turn pages like lantern flames
    history's repeating and the patterns strange
    each victory's preceding an attackers cage
    last straw's are drawn to scales ranging in size
    they're changing in time and gauging our lies
    waiving rights away if your waiting to die
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  17. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I stay fly, chastisers we despise,
    tell em-look me in my eyes ,
    while I woo-sue-slap b!tches till they cry
    no denting our armor,
    I’m sipping arbor
    lurking In the mist
    in the 300 fly bye
    with Nina horror
    telling haters bye-bye
    I got my foot soldiers
    out to get the snitches
    and I got sinners bitches
    and haters backsliding
    to my political pitches,
    no lies...haha
    I stay throwing change-ups
    like Obama fixing Rep. phuck-ups
    this that true dramma
    no actor sh!t, I raffle sh!t,
    just to get a lamma
    I've been to the pits,
    climbed out of rift
    now i can blow this spliff,
    without dramma sh!t
    I tried asking God
    to spare me of this
    bad karma
    but it ain't like I got cancer,
    I just got bad karma
    what the hell
    I guess I'm waiting to die as well
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  18. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    some of us do, too many did.. and tried fighting
    it's the way that it is, life ends with dying
    but before then im trying to defy statistics
    deny physics and imply "i'm alive," till.. time isn't
    i been fucked over, fucked with, and that fucking thief
    made worse by rolls of film developing nothin to see
    so i'll stay stuck in the tree tops
    take a puff enjoy the breeze and drop
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  19. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    is karma harmless, to man really
    i farm wages, from a sand ceilin
    passin hour glass grains still shower in my chanklas
    strappin plastic razor blades, shockin like blanca
    burnin like binaca, cuttin like baraka
    choppin bars up, have fun with tha blow
    gettin nice dream, pee wee table gnomes
    up in smoke green comet sneezin domes
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  20. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Sometimes I know nothing. And I find myself on cloud nine
    Where the rain falls slow, and the sun don’t shine no more
    I’m screaming –shine- sun- shine- show me your sublime
    And I’ll show you a smile; I’m a soldier with the heart to endure
    don’t hate me for the real I gift, I’m sick for sure
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