Freewrite cypher PT.4

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by barnizzle, Mar 21, 2008.

  1. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    ugh
    from the start. my margin of error's
    reachin its mark. tuggin apparel baby momma histerical
    speech is apart of my thinks transmitted thru DOS
    but no, computer geek i'm just good wit my words
    was good in the hood on the curb when i was good with the birds..
    ones cluckin fuckin some from hustlin herb
    had cooch in the burbs bitches callin, i'm out ballin..
    i was rockin a froze chain, gawkers lookin sick
    this was my scene after the 1st thru the 3rd
    but time been past i was a savage progressin thru wonder years
    only shed a tear when kinfolk pass i bled a couple of tears
    and ups and downs sometimes means u get high and drown in beers
    mirrors affectin ageless presence, spirits go slightly detected
    i been seein the news and they views come off slightly depressin
    recessions, gun possession charges on youths gettin arrested
    chased, by the beast plantin seeds while they restin infestin they minds
    sleepin but dreamin bout murderous movies
    the poisons injected
    society downfall's just a lesson
    nazi regime run the U.S., su..bliminally controllin ya dreams we can'y obviously see?
    rhetorical questions..
    mislead the masses cuz the massas make u believe
    until ya self eesteems impedes but me, i'd rather carry my weapon
    stay on the edge close to cockin the piece
    haters conivers and thieves got me stoppin the peace
    gotta get stress out, just airing out thoughts
    like a gun that i bout blowin ya chest out..
    blowin the sess out, another freetype..
    often hated on by some net slouch...
    so a problem is he, i try to expose light as prophecy reads
    skipped college for streets, turned to a scholar stackin his cheese
    packin a mac in the lac glove box stash
    in the back of it latched cops in the back
    a blunt, bag of purple ready to wrap...
    but, my plates good so the pig didnt attack free'd
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  2. Muzhik1st

    Muzhik1st New Member

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    These guys don't wanna be themselves like it's Scary
    I tell em "do you" like before you get married
    But there ordinary, and I'm more than hairy
    Fro cant be shaved-freestylin O cant be slaved
    Way past sick I spit from the Grave
    Ouija board lyrics so you know hes Brave
    I record spirits but no Ghost Writer
    I'm allowed to boast cuz O flows tighter then skinny Jeans,
    Spit pooh like Winnie I'm mean
    I'm tiger I'm tigger , there's no brighter ni66er
    Ask Nas who's the best hell draw O as the figure...woo...

    My names Orestes that's why i refer to my self as O... check out mySpace..
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  3. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Yeah I know you a stupid white boy..no offence to my white hommies but read 2nd to last bar..If you wanna say the word without being Derogatory.. stupid phuck spell it like this...N.I.C.C.A or NIGGA!..Other than that phuck ya style and go back to the trailer you was birth"D" in....siggghs!
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  4. Muzhik1st

    Muzhik1st New Member

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    LOL.. If your talking to me which you probably are.. I aint white... so suck a dick.. second of all I spelled it how i spelled it cause it's a reference to the Nas album.. that was supposed to be called Ni66er.. but it had to be changed cause of sensitive pussys like you... either way if your too stupid to know that was a Nas reference you don't belong in this forum... its called RAPMUSIC..fucking idiot
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  5. More Words

    More Words than the book of Genesis

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    smh...

    in all honesty, im not impressed with ya spits,
    im a veteran dig? a quick right to his head or the chin,
    a legend begins, does RM mass produce this wackness juice,
    or am i just nice, a better reason to begin battlin you,
    shatter his crew, kid, just marvel these words,
    before you get involved in some hurt and it wont be a verse,
    i was hungry at birth, then i awoke just writtin the bible,
    with a knife and a gavel they put my life on a statue,
    named it the Knight of the Battle, more words, it was nice just to have you,
    this fight with some shrapnel turned into me just tryin to grab you,
    and for last news, you thought the verse wasn't intelligent,
    my verbs are the residence of computer networks surged with the elements.


    MW '08
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  6. JaMmY dAvIsJR

    JaMmY dAvIsJR New Member

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    barnizzle ripped that shit son
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  7. JaMmY dAvIsJR

    JaMmY dAvIsJR New Member

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    waCKEST shit i've read on here in a long time
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  8. Muzhik1st

    Muzhik1st New Member

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    Yea right you know you loved that shit... your probably 6ftgrounds alias mad cause i made him look stupid... I know how you whack ass rap board geeks get
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  9. Rem Lynxis

    Rem Lynxis A Slight Modicum of Hope

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    Wicker with the Candle's bits,
    saftey coating, but the mantle's lit.
    comforting ease till the main man'll split,
    cowardice, first thing in man's manuscript.
    Man you bitch, I'll hang ya neck severed,
    letcha body tease while the head lasts forever.
    Conflagration, the massive embers,
    Can't extinguish my hope, Catch the splender.
    Zorro of the flame, masked defender,
    Immortal by the name, outmatched by pressure.
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  10. Rem Lynxis

    Rem Lynxis A Slight Modicum of Hope

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    A young pup, poker faced I run bluffs,
    draw circles, iris purple with fluffed puss.
    Mic dust, the vibrant key to untie cuffs,
    Laugh, breathe, it's the stiflin' me, lighten up.
    Who gunna lay techs to the 8th peck like tiles,
    flicker my tounge taste lead grin a tight smile.
    Win wit a ripe style? Naa, not me.
    Got lucky with dice like the God of Monopoly.
    Success to me, probably is less than,
    the odds of Victory for Hilary in the run for President.
    Makin' sense and then, pay debts and then,
    reciprocate die out, do the rest again.
    Gotta stay Rook, only aim straight,
    see a Pawn play made to make space.
    Letcha face blaze, and blade face,
    still to serious, let they fear take place.
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  11. CaTchW0n

    CaTchW0n New Member

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    all eyes on the son like a lunar eclipse
    my setting is polarizing
    in the form of solar energizing
    Set into shape, take each step, wait
    pacing the place like western saloon
    soon as a goon try wet me, cool as the moon
    splash him after flashing my weapon
    who learned the lesson
    rather be over some beat microprofessing
    quiet should of kept him
    now im trialed denial of the charges against him
    we gotta right to bare arms,
    like my shirt has no sleeves dont believe cuz the weather is warm
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  12. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    lol

    nigga if you typed this message, you a wack ass rap board geek to cuzzo

    no hate tho, that verse was decent but it was far from elite

    spit pooh like winnie ahahaha


    now until you spit somethin that doesnt sound wack as fuck, shut the fuck up
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  13. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    i might post somethin later on
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  14. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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  15. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    blood rushin, strugglin, point of no return
    crime margin u tuggin and close to gun bustin
    and to get the dough u considerin hustlin
    cuz u live by, a gang of fiends u could be numbin'em up
    shit i guess its just one of those days
    nother fine to pay
    stray from new world ways so i'm considered a grey,
    immaculate stackin chips
    when u try and hack the shit, life and pain?
    its just added stress on the brain
    survivin the days ...
    as i exhale,
    some of the jane here go somethin to say
    freetype quicker than mos still sickest with qoutes
    punchline heavy but hidden my wordsworth
    more than a round at any lyrcist lounge show
    spitted wit precsion via the illest of flows
    i mean uh, still its depicted thru screenames
    realness is shown, those wit like logic know why i switch topics
    that heat dead ya, we was fed ta the beast from false prophets

    freed
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  16. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    came from, slum livin so when i'm done spittin on screen
    aint shit on my scene changed
    those was my young visions of pain
    blunts of the dro got me dumbin thru change,
    gotta, call from my ex gal
    went thru her fucked and i came
    days later i felt a hex fall from my frame
    rearview's is cursed
    feelins was worse, born in a blizzard i was
    a cynical birth so i see the future reverse'd
    have dreams, like the presents rehearsed
    effectin my reason and worth, this is redemption presented in verse
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  17. *J-BIG's*

    *J-BIG's* New Member

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    im on a level way further from yours
    i signed up to rapmusic to murder the boards
    if i kill you in my path please dont be mad at me
    its nothin personal u jus a casulty (sp?)
    i strut casualy, automaticly
    my swag on points, im sick its a tragedy
    tradgecly speakin, im after these dweebs
    geeks, lames, freeks only bad behind keys
    get a mic, get a beat, get a motherfuckin plan
    an then an only then maybee u can fuck wit ya man
    im only on the keys guz the studio under construction
    i still keep it bangin like im playin percusion
    its my time to speak, tie for u to start hussion
    guz J-BIG should really be the only name in discussion
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  18. Muzhik1st

    Muzhik1st New Member

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    My shits not "elite"? lol dude I could give less then three fucks... just to let you know elite means you have like a few thousand posts on this site/other aliases and you pull your own dick to get a false sense of self esteem.. either way you haven't posted any thing past decent on this shit but i guess that's elite... I find it funny how this is supposed to be a cypher but all you guys are signaling me out, calling me out on 1 bar.. My shit was raw there's no need to be threatened just keep spitting your whackass shit I aint here to take your "Lime Light"
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  19. Muzhik1st

    Muzhik1st New Member

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    I guess I'm not Elite, Cause me and these "Geeks" don't got Shoot in common
    I'm a king like Tutankhamen Shooting Ramen
    That means I'll aim @ your noodle, Ill take a shot @ your ego
    Dudes wanna be revolutionary, to busy hating on people
    Watch em quote my verse now claiming I aint elite
    But I've met haters before mad that I'm Mag-ni-feek
    You see Rap ain't like football or shooting hoops
    Dudes Will spit a whack verse not knowing the Truth
    In denial of there whackness , claiming they stack chips
    Broke ass fuck IRL online actress
    They all claim there so fly they levitated
    And all wanna rap about shoes Like Masticated
    But @ the end I do me so if you Bastards Hate it
    I'm still be feeling my self Like Masturbated
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  20. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    this nigga's a rookie, u far from a tookie
    endin his verse with..
    masterbate cuz he aint gettin no pussy
    how you s'posed to be hardcore an you dont even curse?
    u prolly never wore a hoody,
    prolly an alter boy the pastor used to bully in church
    this battle is, jordan shorts and shirt vs pumps and skirt
    yes i'ma murder music so gett'em a hearse
    teach'em wack niggaz that put music first
    disrespectin my turf get put in the dirt
    just peeped the nigga myspace, oh you really recordin?
    ya raps is corny u soundin like fred durst
    u a nerd talkin bout king tut, hoopin? i'm snorin'
    what a wasted post on this forum...
    ya favorite movie prolly was "clerks"
    you been a failure since u got pulled out by a nurse
    shoulda been wire hanger'd and strangle'd at birth
    just woulda been one less wack net nigga spittin a edited verse

    freetype
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