freestyle do I have talent

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by CobraMortal, Aug 28, 2010.

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  1. CobraMortal

    CobraMortal New Member

    Aug 28, 2010
    I am new to the board and really have no experience at rapping, but I love to flow. Freestyle all the time. Anyways let me know if you like it, if you hate it I understand. I'm not the best.

    Just try to envision
    a catastrophic collision
    meteor hitting the earth at speeds unforgiving
    wiping out existence
    killing everything living, once what was known is now non existent
    kinda like Augest 6th did when the atomic got dropped on the Hiroshima district killing all men women and children
    How can I stress it
    Most probably don’t know
    So let me go, where it’s barley flesh with receding bones
    Death carts on the rail road
    This is real yo
    The stench is so cold
    Innocents is so
    I don’t even know what to say
    Gas sprayed, cooked in a kiln,
    Left to fry, GOD watched me Die
    He let 5 million perish under hi watchful eye
    And you want me to believe
    Hes there for you and me
    Please as I watch the trees dance from the breeze and remain free
  2. INKrypt

    INKrypt New Member

    Feb 18, 2009
    if you freestyle all the time... but you've never rapped.... ... do you sing it? o_O haha.. not trying to be a smartass, just saying.. if you freestyle, you've rapped before. unless you're talking about keying them.. and gotta love the attitude, humility takes you places

    it's not bad... not amazing, but not bad =T
  3. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

    Sep 5, 2010
    thats not too bad man the middle was a little off but for a freestyle its pretty good you kept with a theme too i always have trouble with that anyway lookin foward to more stuff from you
  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones

    Feb 25, 2008
    not a bad drop man. definitely better than i was when i started off. jus work on spicing up your rhymes a lil. get some more internal rhymes/multi's/whatever you want to use.
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