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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Feme Sole, Sep 16, 2003.

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  1. CurrolinaCenter

    CurrolinaCenter PSYCHO STALKER TYPE

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  2. Kayser Soze

    Kayser Soze Cigmas worst nightmare

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  3. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    i read this in school on like monday i think....and i thought i replied to it...but i guess not...however...i did truly love this piece....i would say more but its already been said....tight drop...

    I loved the man loved hurting me
    and when i gave him what they say is free
    i forgot the hidden cost~


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  5. IIthousandth Ndividual

    IIthousandth Ndividual still the grimiest

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    these are the type of poems i like..where the end just slaps you in the face. it feels good to be free, doesn't it?
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  6. TrufDXaggerator

    TrufDXaggerator New Member

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    I thought i replied to dis too i kno i read it but i jus showed my cousin and we liked it...my attention span wont allow me to fully apreciate dis but i kno tha ending is real good.
    Truthfuly spittin and Truf Fully Spittin OUT
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  7. *Princess*

    *Princess* skantless bitch

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    I loved the man loved hurting me

    ^^my fav line! i feel like that a lot...i also love how you do that with your words...deffinatly a great drop, nice job
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  8. really nice piece, the last stanza was my fave, and how you switched up the ending..
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    Royallyraggid New Member

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  10. Nu Voice

    Nu Voice the mystery of iniquity

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    well, i ain't been to the poetry realm in a short, and your piece was the first one that i read. I must say, it was a great way to re-enter the realm. i love your style. keep postin ma.
    ~RESPECT
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