Frank P. - Transient...

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by TenFold, Mar 31, 2010.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    test
  2. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    test
  3. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

    Joined:
    Jun 21, 2000
    Messages:
    15,906
    crushed it...niggas be mad sleepin and u doper than most the cats that rap
    test
  4. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    thanks Black..and its all good..i know how it is on RM..haha..



    -10
    test
  5. Dice

    Dice Still One Of A Kind...

    Joined:
    Jul 8, 1999
    Messages:
    444
    This was cool man, I'd like to suggest a hook, or some sort of break in it somewhere. I can appreciate what youre doing how your spitting and all, but what Ive found in my experience is people, in general, dont like being beat over the head with 2 and a half minutes of a dude spittin straigh unless its like Gift of Gab or some shit.

    One thing I noticed, is theres a few sections of your verse towards the end that could easily be used as a hook for what youre saying in this song man...

    If thats final and finished on the track cool, if its not, its over compressed and way too loud.

    Return the listen please.
    test
  6. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

    Joined:
    Dec 17, 2000
    Messages:
    23,902
    test
  7. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    ups..

    i RTFed these last two artists ^^



    anyone else want feedback?..





    -10
    test
  8. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    ups yall..




    -10
    test
  9. blitz204

    blitz204 BlitzBeats.com

    Joined:
    Feb 25, 2008
    Messages:
    338
    HOT TRACK!!!! Nice melodies, good vibe, lyrical content flows! The vocals need to be turned up a notch because the beat is Heavy. overall, good track.
    test
  10. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    up for more replies..leave links..





    -10
    test
  11. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    up for more "views"


    -10
    test
  12. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

    Joined:
    Jun 21, 2000
    Messages:
    15,906
    if u rapped about blunts, 40's, bitches, and glocks ud have 100+ views...

    just some advice for your next track...
    test
  13. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    fuck that..
    test
  14. AeonFTF

    AeonFTF reverbnation.com/aeon1

    Joined:
    Dec 24, 2008
    Messages:
    15
    peepin. this beat is filthy. real sick vibe to it. I like your sound, some real hip hop shit. lyrics are dope, nice and complex. I really dig your delivery and flow. You actually sound a lot like a friend of mine from high school lol, its kinda trippy. good drop man. i really like this cut. ima check out some more of your music.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-a...-i-never-went-away-hate-love-let-me-know.html
    test
  15. Lance Mance

    Lance Mance New Member

    Joined:
    Apr 17, 2010
    Messages:
    10
    ...that he ll hopefully not follow
    test
  16. FernoSo716

    FernoSo716 New Member

    Joined:
    Apr 17, 2010
    Messages:
    12
    i like this beat got that coast feel to it feel me...u got a nice flow but i mean after like the first min it got repetitve..needed a hook sumwhere up n there...but u def was speaking some real shit n there to..i like that thas wat made me listen thru the whole song tho..overal deccent track....keep doin ya thing peep my joint slum muzik produced by the shah bros
    test
  17. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    thanks for the love..Fern and Aeon..ill RTF soon..



    -10
    test
  18. SeakDaKaper

    SeakDaKaper New Member

    Joined:
    Apr 18, 2010
    Messages:
    230
    damn, this beat is nasty, feelin alotta the ish your are dropping on the track
    the flow is on point, the only thing that mite need adjustin is the loudness,
    its a bit loud, but other than that, im diggin this track
    keep it up
    test
  19. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2005
    Messages:
    1,528
    up again..i RTF - ask all these other fools..




    -10
    test
  20. dj anticz

    dj anticz MURDAGRAM GANGSTA!!!!!!!!

    Joined:
    Nov 9, 2001
    Messages:
    1,608
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)