:: For Christ Sakes Feat. Rells Don't sleep on this

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by D-QueL, Oct 5, 2005.

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  1. D-QueL

    D-QueL New Member

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  2. bensik

    bensik No Vaccine.

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  3. The Hex

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    thanks for feeding my ish.. i'm returning the favour as always

    ok beat choice is good for a diss... your flow is pretty good but it falls off slightly at points u slip off beat and it doesnt sound on point... your delivery is pretty decent you've got good energy behind the mic

    the hook is pretty nice the cat on it sounds polished...

    the lyrics are decent... i don't like how u mention guns alot, i would prefer to hear more hard hitting punches but since its a personal diss track i guess there's alot i'm not fully appreciating

    overall not too bad.. keep elevating

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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    returnin the listen .... beats cool not bad .... intro was aight .... flow was cool off at points but not real bad though .... Hook was aight voice on the person who did it was cool .... Lyrics not bad Overall pretty dope for a diss ...
    thanx for peepin mine Pz stay up
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  5. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    beat is ok, could bang a lil more, missing somethin, 1st guy is ok, flow is with the beat i suppose, hook is ok, nothin special, 2nd guy is a lil better, came out hard, not really my style. but yall did ya thing, keep workin on it, i just feel like yall needed a harder beat for a track like this
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  6. D-QueL

    D-QueL New Member

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    come on dont be sleeping on this, need more feedback

    uppin...
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  7. BilCosbynDZK

    BilCosbynDZK www.myspace.com/techomega

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    beat was cool felt the intro hmmm lyrics r good but the gun things lil played out but u came straight on it im liking the hook usualy on diss tracks people dont use hooks but this fits in it well

    stay good fam
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  8. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    returning.. not feelin the beat.. not my choice..

    first kid is str8.. voice kinda annoying.. to much reverb on vocals.. doesn't sit on the beat right.. lyrics r coo.. flow pretty basic.. but its all gravy.. hook was coo tho.. 2nd kid is aight.. quality is eh..

    overal this was an aight track... just need some work on the flow.. and mixing..

    keep it coming.. px
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  9. D-QueL

    D-QueL New Member

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    thanks for tha feedback everyone, still looking for a few more...

    Uppin...
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  10. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    listening,
    beat is ok, not really my steez, first dude needs some work, hook is coo, the second verse, dude has an accent, not bad, good energy through out the whole track, stay on ya grind son, just keep doing it,

    ~rhymes~

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=930024
    ^LOok
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  11. D-QueL

    D-QueL New Member

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    uppp....
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