Flawless Real Talk-Pressure 3

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by FlawlessRI, Feb 28, 2012.

  1. FlawlessRI

    FlawlessRI FLawlessRI.com

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    Thanks fam the music is free to DL at my site right now
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  2. PoyzPoyz

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    Wow. Hands down the sickest track I've came across in this forum. These bars are beast. Respect homie. One~
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  3. Shawn Phillips

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  4. Ginabombom9t9

    Ginabombom9t9 New Member

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    So my brother was watching your video, I saw it too... I had to make an account here to tell you that your song is so amazing & inspiring real music touch's souls, I went to your website & saw all the other videos. I want you to know I will support your music always I downloaded all the mixtapes I am a big fan now thank you so much for what you do.
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  5. red rayn

    red rayn New Member

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    your tracks are sick
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  6. FlawlessRI

    FlawlessRI FLawlessRI.com

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    Thnx for all the feed back everyone I really appreciate it.
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  7. Resilient.

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    Flawless, huh? You're going to go places man. Your flow, although nothing crazy or unique, is on point. You have a very smooth delivery, which made this easy to listen to. You can hear the emotion you put into every word when you laid it down on record. A very personal song right here, and I admire the fact you can throw it down on paper like that. It's not easy to make something along these lines sound good. The one part where you talk about a mind game, then you take the 9 and put it to your head. The flat line sound I did not like. It was a sloppy transition. That's the only problem I had with the song was that transition. Intro was okay, not sure if it fit this song. I liked the ending, to be continued. Leaves room for the unknown. Keeps the listener guessing. Oh, and this beat is disgusting. Definitely a top 10 beat I've ever heard on this site.

    The video itself was cool. Generic, but cool. I like the simplicity of it, though. Some people do a video and it captures all of your attention and you lose the meaning of the song. Outfit was cool, lighting was cool, and it flowed well with the song. Again, simple, yet dope.

    I will be looking for more songs from you, man. You have something here..
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  8. FlawlessRI

    FlawlessRI FLawlessRI.com

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    Thnx for the detail feed back fam.
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  9. Red D..125

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    yo that was tight 9.5/10
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  10. Ginabombom9t9

    Ginabombom9t9 New Member

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    100/10 in my opinion!
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  11. llaquelin

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    Haha I agree!!
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  12. Contract

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    Normally I skip over the "life shit" songs in an album. I'm into the sport side of it, I wanna hear the showcase songs and maybe some crazy concepts. But this kind of thing can be done right, it just requires more sincerity, and more attention to detail than most rappers have. impressive sheet
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  13. xMetasiNx

    xMetasiNx Met-uh-siN

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    This was an absolute pleasure to listen to. Thanks for sharing!
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  14. FlawlessRI

    FlawlessRI FLawlessRI.com

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    Damn, Thank you all for ALL the feed back...
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  15. FxTDiilz

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    For some reason this site wont let me create a new thread so yes im doing the lowlife thing of posting my link in another video, but its because i have no other way to get the song across to you guys.. could yous please listen to My track, its about what im feeling now about not having any recognition even though i started rapping 2 years ago.
    Feelings - Dilz - YouTube
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  16. Blc Prophett

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  17. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    You straight up killed this, man. I showed people "Made to Fly" for a while cuz I thought it was way dope....awesome to see and hear some real anger turned into energy here....legit as fuck, man. 1
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  18. Omizz Beats

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    Yup, keep pushing those tracks homie* If you need exclusive hot beats check out OmizzBeats for a serious veriety of quality production @ *** http://OmizzBeatz.com ***
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  19. BraidzMC

    BraidzMC More Than A Hairstyle

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  20. FlawlessRI

    FlawlessRI FLawlessRI.com

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    I agree fam & thnx.
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