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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Determined, Dec 26, 2004.

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  1. Determined

    Determined fear is my only god

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    I think its about time for a change and Im putting you first,

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    Lord, I am tired
    My body grows weak;
    I've tried, and I've tried
    Your help I do seek.
    In prayers I've sent up
    With things I desire;
    What you return fill my needs
    But I persist to inquire.

    Oh, please help me
    To just understand;
    Your wishes, my purpose
    Of walking this land.

    Forgive me the pit-falls
    I've put myself in;
    In your strength I'll try
    And start over again.

    Let me help those who need
    Give drink to whom thirst;
    But most of all Lord
    To serve you first.​
    test
  2. this poem was really nice. It had a delicate and honest feel to it. It was a heart to heart with God. Nice
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  3. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    i liked this, i can always appreciate anything that gives praise to the lord, i really liked the ending to this... 1
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