First verse in a min..lemme know

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  1. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    thanks.
    i just wanted to get those imposter claims off my neck.. nikkas know thats how i write..it might not be the best..but definitely my technique and shit

    good lookin
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  2. John_Dough

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    lmao...a bitch was actually suckin my dick during the only time I ever saw the movie so didn't pay too much attention to details...
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  3. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    i got it....















    bagged it up...




























    AND THREW IT IN THE FUCKING TRASH WITH THE REST OF THE GARBAGE!!!!!
    HAHAHAHAHAHA...a kurt cobaine line in 2008?!?!?!?!?!...lmmfao....you can't be serious...the audacity of this kid...wow!
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  4. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    haha really...well the persians took the hunchback into their ranks

    hence the line

    but yea i didnt need to explain that untill..noob status nikkas came in the room
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  5. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    whats funny is that line has more wit than any line your verse had this week

    Nerve on a

    Nirvana


    better wordplay

    that COME BUST YA BULL SPONTANEOUS ANYDAY

    LMFAO GAME OVER
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  6. John_Dough

    John_Dough New Member

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    diz strikes back in muff's thread?
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  7. penis mightier

    penis mightier B_Complex

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    i love you too sweety
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  8. John_Dough

    John_Dough New Member

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    no love for cape-a-bull? damn I'm signing out of the league
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  9. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    your quiet now?

    i thought so
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  10. penis mightier

    penis mightier B_Complex

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    yeah im quiet. the wording in the hunchback line made it sound like take back something as if they had it before. a wording issues not conceptual.
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  11. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    's funny if i ever see diz in the league..hes gettin his ass whooped

    so keep havin fun talkin crap untill we meet

    because you writing capabilities are limited
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  12. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    not my problem.

    it makes perfect sense.. i dont write my verse for delusional people who cant think outside of the box...and who cant read the obvious

    's funny how scum comes in the thread and talks shit..

    and the good writers come in here and compliment

    it makes sense to me
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  13. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    i got the nirvana line lil dude, but it's 2008, and all you said was kill yourself, no flip on the concept to make it relevant today, son.
    look, i understand you're rusty(weak excuse if you ask me), but that be like me droppin an OJ Simpson line and only sayin 'kill ya bitch'...feel me, no flip on a decade old concept to make it matter today...'extraneous'...ah, i got to really use that with pertinence...yeah, extraneous describes that to a 'T'.
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  14. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    that verse is barely even mediocre lil dude, for real. i'm just keepin it real to ya. i mean you came at me like you was some rhyming god with ill metaphors and the dopest concepts, hard as nails punches and all that...but you're barely even scratchin the suface of average...wow...the egos 'round this place...sheeesh!
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  15. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    this is from someone who has a losing record in the rbl


    id rather read fracture's and proof's posts

    both established heads who dont suck

    and they said it was nice.
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  16. penis mightier

    penis mightier B_Complex

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    take the hunch back = take something back that was had before. take the hunchback like persians. breaking it down makes it sound like the persians had him before. its not being creative or anything its the word back just doesnt fit which ruins the actual line. so imo epic fail.

    kthanxbye
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  17. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    penis it took you this long to conjure up a reply and your still making yourself sound like an idiot

    look..read my post.. ok?


    take the hunchback is reffering to himself thinking hes going to win...

    Hunch back

    and Hunchback

    do you not see this?


    So in essence he is taking something back

    the Hunch

    its just the two words put together to make Hunchback which= the ugly thing off 300

    pfft im prolly wasting my time..this nikka prolly cant even write a battle verse



    You are an idiot.
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  18. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    so what if those 2 said it was nice...who are they...god and jesus...get tha fuck outta here lil dude...you are trash...face it...and i'm 3-3...hey niggas got out on me...what ever...never once did i say i was undefeated or a text god or n e of that...you took all this bs and just ran with it the way lil kids do...oh well, now we all know the truh...you are trash.
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  19. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    you say we all?

    whos we all?

    you and your deluded ass mind?

    and some other guy whos not in the league?

    LOL>
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  20. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    you know how you were referring to user and headless and great

    i see fracture being better than them both..

    so no not god or jesus

    but definitely a great writer whos a veteran of battle leagues

    ur just talking..with yourself behind you

    your going to keep losing because you suck

    you can keep thinking your good

    but when ur 3-9 and u sign out of the league..dont act like i didnt warn your fruit ass
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