First Beat Ever Made. Just Looking For Some Feedback...

Discussion in 'Audio Help & Tips' started by DJ Detruence, Aug 29, 2013.

  1. DJ Detruence

    DJ Detruence New Member

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    I've DJ'd for years, had a little bit of a slow period. Got my hands into producing...this is what came out.


    https://soundcloud.com/detruence


    Looking for any type of feedback as I actually enjoyed the process and plan on sticking with it.
    test
  2. zipperhedjoe

    zipperhedjoe Conrad murray, mic killa

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    ill give u some feedback if u do the same for 1 of mines.
    the drums/percussion sound tight, the melody sounds simple but it got its own unique vibe to it.
    I think a rapper w/ a fast tech 9 type of flow would sound great on it. Its pretty good for a 1st beat in my opinion. it sounded all clean & neat too. My early beats sounded real noisey & messy. But at the same time you could work on adding some more sounds & effects to your beats in the future

    please give some feedback on mines too
    http://rapmusic.com/threads/my-remi...ht-wanna-fight-some1.1359053/#post-1070461194
    test
  3. D Funkdafied

    D Funkdafied D-Funkdafied Music

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    For a first beat it has some nice creativity with it.
    But just needs a bit more added to it to make it sound unique if that is what you want...
    Also research mixing as your tune is really clipping and such.

    Keep it up and support my work dude!

    Producer since 2010 - www.dfunkdafiedbeats.com
    test
  4. YNRG Corey

    YNRG Corey New Member

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    It's good for a first beat. The whole sound is generic. Seems a little too much at times. Something feels out of key.
    test

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